Ah! So good! I really like this; it's a lovely characterization of Kotoha, better than most.

I noticed a few grammatical errors, though. "...then he wouldn't scold her no more." It should be "anymore". And this one, "And she would deep down, continue..." should be "And she would, deep down, continue..."

Ha, you are watching Shinkenger, too! I really like it so far (no wonder,with PRNS still being my favorite), and I think you've captured Kotoha very well and in character. She is the kind of person who would go into some deep introspection after Takeru's harsh words in that epi.

Great job!

Great job on this story. I've just started Shinkenger as well and it looks like it's got a lot of potential. This was a good read and I hope that you'll do more Shinkenger fics as the series progresses.

Hello. Very good story. :)

interesting, i had noticed that she seems a bit happy to be around Takeru (and takeru seemed a bit sadden that Chiaki carried Kotoha in ep6)