Reviews for Visitation
Slim2None chapter 16 . 7/2/2016
Just found this story. I really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent. Awesome story!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/11/2016
Why haven't you finished the story? It's really good!
jk chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
hes not a vampire? wtf?
he should be a vampire! it would make the story better!
Comrade'sRoza chapter 16 . 6/8/2015
Fantastic fic ! Please update soon .
rjh1960 chapter 16 . 12/25/2014
Thanks for writing, hoping that even though so much time has passed you will fiish the story!
GreenEyes555 chapter 16 . 8/5/2014
please, please, PLEASE update!

This was one of the first fics i ever read when i started reading twilight fanfiction years ago & I would love to read the full complete version! It's a wonderful fic & has so much potential! Please finish!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

-GreenEyes555

xo
babesbraves chapter 16 . 10/7/2013
This is only the second AH twilight fan fiction I have ever read and it's fantastic so please do me a favour and finish it as it's too good to waste!
yurixoxo chapter 14 . 10/5/2013
"Watch out Masen. Someone might call the fashion police on you!"I nearly fell out of my chair laughing.
yurixoxo chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
Scariest ending ever, I'm afraid to click "Next". But totally loving the story so far.
Bells love Jazz chapter 16 . 9/28/2013
i love this please say theres going to be a new chapter soon
amegli chapter 16 . 1/4/2013
i enjoy this story so much. i hope you will continue this story and let your readers know what else will happen. eager for more :)
J.DRAST chapter 16 . 4/15/2012
Hello. I just absolutely LOVE this story! It's amazing! I have never read one with a plot such as this one on here before. I see that you have not updated since 2010. Are you not going to finish this story then? What a shame, because it so interesting and entertaining. Edward needs his HEA, aferall. I couldn't get over Charlie and his bonding with Edward and the closeness he developed with their group of friends (Jasper/Alice/Rose/Emmett/Mr. and Mr. Cullen, etc.). Charlie just amazed me, with how well he treated Edward. I DO hope that you reconsider completing this story. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Sasha Feirce chapter 16 . 11/8/2011
lovelovelovelove! Its been so long since you last updated but please please please continue! This is such a cute story line!
VeelaWishes chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
*Pouts* My Edward in jail. No fair. ;) X
Isabella Elizabeth Clark chapter 16 . 4/11/2011
Please update!
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