LOL

Nice very nice short with a good plot. Although if sakura was so hart core she would have taking sasuske back.

Omg, this is slowly killing me. I just feel so sad for the people back in Konoha and how lonely Sakura must have been.

Omg, Sasuke is being such an ass here. A bully and bossy, well he's an Uchiha so can't say much about it. Anyway, nice start. Loving it now.

Naruto is in looooove.

I love how they have their babies on the same day! But still the way you described childbirth made me want to rethink my decision to have kids in the future.

Well of course they're going to be identical, they are Uchihas' after all. They all have black hair and eyes.

I realize this story is a few years old but, honestly the plot and character development moved too quickly. What should have occured over the course of a few chapters, all happened in the first chapter which left me realizing there couldn't be much left for another 21 chapters. In order for a story to be successful, it has to be well paced. Too much moved too fast, almost an entire story on it's own seemed crammed in to the first chapter alone which left me disappointed. But I will give the benefit of the doubt and read onward a bit to be sure. It's just so far, I feel it's already exhausted the pace needed to keep the reader hooked on for more. I hope I'm wrong.

This story was so fast their relationship is almost unbelievable ... All they did was had sex. No relationship build up whatsoever . Disappointed .

ahem...well...that was fast...

Woah... HE LOVES HER! OH HAPPY DAY! MY MIND IS HAVING A PARTY!

aww, sad story

THIS IS SO WRONG! THEY ARE COUSINS!

ugh sakura shouldn't forgive him, imagine u're family crying because u died...

OMG I thought you actually killed my fav. couple for a second there. You scared the crap out of me! please dont do that again!I couldnt stand the loss!