I’d like to thank you for this beautiful work you have done! I am truly amazed by the way you told the story that I couldn’t wait to read. I could see your writing style develop and become progressively better and inspiring. It took me a long time to find out this fanfiction world, but now I can’t stop reading your stories. I loved chapter 16 when we finally got to read more about Esme and Carslile’s feelings. I also enjoyed all of Edward’s point of views. The birth of Renesmee was so good! Keep writing, please!

Thanks for writing this. It is beautifully written. The honeymoon scenes are elegant and tasteful. I enjoyed reading both Edward and and Bella's points of view. I have read up to Chapter 5 and am loving it. Can't wait to continue reading.

Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

Great chapter.

Great chapter!

Loved ur version and the extra detail!

Loved reading ur version!

Lovely chapter!

I love how more in depth we are getting their emotions.

Interesting interactions!

Love the detail!

Great insight into the various characters thought processes during this difficult time

I loved ur expansion of the discussion regarding this decision.

Great job!

I love that you’ve given us the different POVs on this situation.