Hope this hasn’t been forgotten since this has been one of the best fanfics that I’ve read that doesn’t have naruto immediately going to op cause of something. Also is naruto going to ask Sarutobi about his father?

I like this.

Will you comeback and update this I hope you do because it’s good

Sorry to say this but I don't like Ami and the team you put Naruto on. I like the Team 7 of Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, and Kakashi.

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Some of the reviewers... What OC's are you talking about? Everyone of the main characters are canon, though their ages are different. And the female Tsuchikage was an OC, but she got sacked and was merely there for plot purposes.

This was so good, until the OCs ruined it ;-;

Good points on the flaws with the bell test for their very first time together

X-D for Gaara's development. You show him as a wiser, stronger, dangerous ninja...and then the pranks! All goes together so perfectly!

Nice adaptations to new canon material!

Do hope you get back to this!

Ooooh, very canny by Roshi and Iwa! Something far better than a mere assassination attempt!

Very tense here!

Really like all the stuff Killer B has done for Gaara and the others :-)

Really like how you are doing Gaara here

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I don't like OC's. It always ruins the story.

Good story, I didn't like how you introduced two OCs though, and one from the Kurama clan at that, although it's nice to see an OC with a favoritism towards Genjutsu.

umm...soon? lol. love it, love seeing the jinchuuriki interact with one another as well.

I mean no offence, this is very well written, but I usually don't read fanfics with OCs in them- just for next time, there's an OC option in the character reel thing. Sorry for being THAT person, but it just irks me to no end.