You do know that morning sickness doesn't kick in till about week 7, right? And that pregnancy usually lasts 40 weeks, right? or that there's going to be a messy hush of blood and birth mucous and fluids and then the afterbirth of the placenta? She isn't going to be in the state to calmly sit and chat about baby names. she maybe even has bruised eyes and is like a floppy piece of taffy.

LOVED THIS!

LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS!

www loved this

This was a great Mamoru Haruka story. :) thank you so much!

I think Kaneko can also be used to call someone a child. Or is that Kanako? It all depends on the character used to write the name.

The ending is so cute..teehee..lol yeah..we'd like to see if any male can create that same miracle. Also, you spelled diligently as diligintly by mistake. Other than that, there were no real errors other than not using a comma in between sequences if descriptor words in the first chapter. There is no significant err though. - Now to read more of your stories!

Waaah I love it! Haha I laughed so hard when Haruka is like.. "What should I have said at the age of twelve? Hi, I'm your future wife. That won't happen for a few more years, but in the meantime, will you protect me from the people who want to use my powers?" Rofl I love how everyone starts to see through the bad guy act that Mamoru had..ever find it ironic that his name literally means to protect? Lol no really..now I want to look up his last name. But really..that word is used often.

Wonderful story. I have to agree with you that Mamoru was a little out of character sometimes, though (I can't imagine him being so lovey-dovey, but that's pretty much it). But it is nice to imagine him and Haruka (finally!) getting together. Yay! It made me so happy when he kissed her!

I thought the portrayal of everyone else though was pretty much spot on. Igawa, even with his limited appearances, is great. Sierra and Juliet were so funny. And I was really impressed with how you wrote Haruka. You've made it obvious that she's still so young, but she has a unique wisdom that you really let shine through. And of course your writing is (as always) superb!

thanks for the story! cheers!

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Really great story. Thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed this. Thanks for the read.

Omg, I LOVE THIS!

So i really enjoyed it i thought it was really good but the only thing that bothered me was the pregnant thing mean i know haruka is a precog but symptoms for pregnancy dont start showing up that fast it takes awhile. thats all i wanted to say but good story and keep writing!

Great ending to one of the best manga stories out there.

Teenage pregnancy, married by the preist set out to kill them, all sounds about right for UDDUP ;) loved it. Nervous Mamoru is hilarious.