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Awe. Very good end.

What happened to Sasuke did he leave Konoha or did he die? O.o

this was the best part and if you add a little to the end of the second chapter it can fit perfectly with the other chapters great read ty :)

this is sooo romantic and passionate ty for the good read :)

*sighs in relief* my confusion its gone now i acually really enjoyed this once i figured out what was -sort of- happening :D and yayy! Sasu went back to Naru! :DDD

*read last part* i... what... i dont... what just... I DONT UNDERSTAND ANYMORE ;-; seriously though, the last part confused me a bit... did Sasu die? did he just... stop wanting to see Naru anymore... did he leave... i just... what? ;-;

I liked it but it was kinda sad

So let me get this straight. They're having sex with each other just for the fun of it?

NEED MOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE

Cute and sad...i wish my ex did the same..but my heart will forever be in peices..if you could please contuine this!it was so close to making me cry..almost i dont for simple lose but when i understand the lain i will. Please contuine your an amazing writter!

I feel like crying . I don't even understand what's happening and I feel like crying. That's stupid, really stupid.

Thats... Um.. What could I say? It was intriguing.

I am content with this, don't change it, don't worry about the way it is written compared to the other chapters, I think it fits nicely.

I love it. :3