Did she and Draco just had sex? Is that because of affection or it's just at the moment?

Mal, hmmm?
Short for Malvolio, I assume?

Love the song on top, awesome band Evanescence.

Lol this story is about REJECTION AT ITS PEAK can't stop crying my heart out and sniveling all over my face...

I love Tempest! I love SEVERUS! I love Lucius! I love Draco! I love Bellatrix! Omg never in a thousand years would I think I'd fall in love with death eaters but oh my gaaaawwd. I think you just gave them justice by giving their side of the story :'( I love the twists in your story and they all seem to fit in with the canons :D
The dialogues were great, the story was professionally written, no character was ooc :)
There were no pairings stated in the preview, so I hadn't a clue as to whom Tempest would end up with eventually... I had to finish 57 whole chapters to find out! But it was worth it

I completely fell in love with Severus, he really was the bravest, was brilliant, comforting in his own way :) CALM and COLLECTED in the midst of war (one thing I really admire about him) and he was so loyal to Lily :''''') it's just sad to think that we would never know if he eventually saw Tempest as Tempest and not as Lily's daughter like Tempest would've at least wanted :'(

AND THE ENDING FUUUUU! It was my undoing omfg I'm dying help TT like it was the craziest and one of the most memorable plot twists I've read in
I was like
Ooh Mal... Your daddy was the bravest man I ever knew 3 TT

Lol this story is about REJECTION AT ITS PEAK haha can't stop crying my heart out and sniveling all over my face...

I love Tempest! I love SEVERUS! I love Lucius! I love Draco! I love Bellatrix! Omg never in a thousand years would I have thought I'd fall in love with death eaters but oh my gawwwd! I think you just gave them justice by giving their side of the story :'( I love your own twists in your story and the best part is that they still fit in with the canons

The dialogues were great, very professionally written and no character was ooc :) Tempest I think went a little craycray but it's totally reasonable coz I know she just had it too much already. I even thought for a moment she was gonna die by the end of your fic... Felt really sorry for her :'(

There were no pairings stated in the preview which left me in huge suspense as to whom Tempest really is gonna end up with... I had to finish 57 whole chapters to find out! But so worth it

I completely fell in love with Severus, I think you gave him justice the most in your fic... He really was the bravest, was brilliant, CALM and COLLECTED in the midst of war (yeah so true, one thing I really admire about him) and he was so loyal to Lily which turned me on more :'( :) :D it's just a little sad to think that we would never know if he eventually saw Tempest as Tempest and not as Lily's daughter, like Tempest would've at least wanted :(

AND THAT ENDING FUUUUU! It totally was my undoing omfg I'm dying help TT like the craziest but one of the most memorable plot twists I've ever read in
I was like
Ooh Mal... your father was the bravest man I ever knew lol love it :')

Wow, I really was unsure about the Severus kissing romance thing as I'd found them awkward and creepy in the past but I love you fic and when when you made snape do the whole I'm surprised u didn't turn out worse speech it make more sense and it was really for me a turning point in the story. Overall it is an amazing fic excellently written and the potrayal of tempests inner feeling and outward reactions going through all the hardship and abuse was on point, just amazing

Lovely ending xx so her oldest is snaps kid wounded how Draco reacted to that then lol x

Poor thing

Tom marvolio riddle

Aww

Why is she having sex with everyone

This was the best story ever. It was so refreshing. I don't have enough words to say how much I loved reading this.

Ech. I hope Bellatrix won't be too disappointing.

Welp.

Ech. I hope she doesn't get scolded for anything... Ech.