This was such a wonderfully planned out story that had me at the edge of my seat throughout! And to think that I only expected some fluff due to the cute beginning. It’s honestly a shame that this never got finished, but I’m still glad it’s as long as it is before you stopped. Thank you for the pleasure of reading this! :)

No! This can't be! This Fic can't be dead... I believe is one of the most beloved Joshyme fics in this website... Wish I could've arrived and read at the beginning, accompanying every update... All I can do now is hope to have it back
(I know it's a bit dramatic, but is true)

It seems I'm the only one left... after all these years of people waiting and giving up hope, I waited. And it seems it will end like this, with me, waiting. After all this time, everyone else is gone... and I'm alone, in my bed in the corner of my dark room at one-o-clock in the morning waiting for something that I know deep down will never come. But even through my insufferable waiting, I will never give up on this, on YOU. For if I give up hope, then who will be left to do all of the waiting? And one last thing, always remember that This Story Ends. With. YOU.

Gosh dangit! One chapter, just ONE MORE CHAPTER!

So apparently it has taken five years to wrote the ending. (I understand if you have writers block, because I can get bad cases of that. Just look at the last time I updated...) But please update! The anticipation will kill me!

Beat didn't trust Joshua, but still ate the dumplings he brought. I thought he couldn't be anymore stupid...

I really like this so far! I always thought that they would be a cute couple...

I love it I love it I LOVE IT! And I love you too because you have given me one of my favorite Joshyme stories of all time! Honestly, I love how you write this story and I've enjoyed reading this story so much! You've made me feel like this actually could happen, it helps that you're also the only story I've found with Joshua actually alive. It's thanks to you I love Joshyme as much as I do so thank you so much! I know this may be asking a lot since its been so long but can you continue this story please? I HAVE to know what happens!

Okay... Last updated September of 2010... and the only chapters left was the finale and the epilogue...
Darn it Inspiration-Loss! You always stop the good stories... -_-
Literally, 29 chapters of awesome-ittude and then it doesn't finish. To be honest, I'm not too peeved at the fact that it stopped considering that this last chapter gave me some kind of fluffed closure with everyone alive and in Shibuya. I just wished it could be it completed so I could read more, and I guess that's a good reason to be mad at a story's abrupt silence.
I just really like this story for what it did with these character and gave me a great romance/mystery/mystical/action sort of thing. I'm tired of looking for a Joshyme story, and in the ones I find, Joshua is completely OOC to the point where he's a one-noted sap or where he meets all the criteria of an abusive spouse. Or the stories where it takes for-EVER for them to do anything relationship-y.
You didn't put me through that with this and I appreciate it.
Have a wonderful day, because this story made mine one. Thanks a bunch!

OMG, I'm like, the same as you are.. Are we sisters or something..? Seriously. I'm Filipino with a bit of Spanish from my mom!

If only I knew where to begin... I realize that this is the first review this story will have had in months, but I truly hope it reaches you. This story... it blew me away. TWEWY doesn't have many stories to begin with, and with a pairing as foreign as Rhyme and Joshua, to find a genuinely good story about them being together is nearly impossible. While this story is unfinished, and will likely remain that way forever, I enjoyed it more than I can describe. I have read probably hundreds of stories on this website since I've been a member, and there are only a select few that have caused my emotions to stir in a way that it momentarily affects my ability to function. This story is one of them. I don't know if you will read this, or even see it; for all I know you've moved on from writing and have finished school. For all I know, you could be dead! I hope that isn't the case, of course. But, I ask you. If you will, please finish this story. I realize that is a bit much to ask, since it's been nearly three years since you've touched it, but I believe I speak for more than myself when I say that this beautiful story deserves a proper end.

Thank you.

Wow, this chapter was just adorable and the other two before hand were good build up in my opinion.

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!1 It was nice to see Rhyme's playful side.

GO FLUFF! hehehehe!

LOVED this chapter!