Wow! That was some serious angstiness!

S&M. Snape and Malfoy. the name of the place. ingenious.

Holy shit, talk about a lot of fucking. I dunno how I feel about this story... very conflicted.
On one hand, you've got the necessary fluff for Drarry, you've got a decent plot, some needed drama, and some progression. All good things.
On the other hand, though, you've got some major OOCness goin on. Like Snape and Lucius. I feel like those two could've been handled differently and still would've had the same effect. Some things were rushed, and some things were uncomfortable (but that's opinion, so I won't really count it)

I think... I liked this, but not enough to favorite. Regardless, I appreciate the work put into this!

I feel that this was an okay story. There are somethings I would have changed about it but it was a fine read. However, I do believe that there was a problem with the genre descriptions based on the fact that this story was heavy on the ANGST. You might want to fix that and warn other future readers. It would be the polite thing to do.

He did EXACTLY as you wanted, Harry! :D

...Does it really take all this just to find Harry and Draco? It seems a bit of overkill. I mean, just do the 'point me' spell or something.

Fuck Harry. Again, he can go jump off a cliff with all the angst he is suffocating himself with, and dragging Draco down with. -snorts-

Meh, I feel no sympathy for Harry. This is what he gets for being unable to make up his mind. And why did he not think to TALK to Draco about his feelings!? Why not explain why he felt violated, I is quite obvious Draco would have felt horrible and apologized, and explained (AGAIN) why he did it.

But, no. He decide to fuck someone behind Draco's back instead. At least Draco had Harry's interest in mind from the moment he realized his feelings. Not so much for Harry, who kept going between hating and like Draco, never bothering to actually KNOW the poor boy.

Also, Draco retaliating after being cheated on is GREAT. You do not know how many HP/DM stories I have read were Harry cheated and Draco does NOTHING about it. Just cry and then take him back the moment Harry decides he does wants to be with him.

What a FUCKING ASSHOLE! Just jump off a blood cliff Harry!?$# !$!?$!?

I loved this story! It was really great! And even though the snape smut was a little hard to get through I did it! (I also am starting to understand a little more of what you find charming about him) I have always held any story written by you in high regaurd even if I haven't read it yet and find your writting skills incredible and you haven't let me down yet. Especially not with this story!

Somebody help me claw my eyes out faster! I can handle anything but you making me imagine Snape in nothing but leather pants! (is it freaky that my twisted mind automatically added one of those leather police officers hats to the outfit...?)

After reading this chapter again, I do think it was a wise decision to choose how it ended up. Harry's personality, while an incubus was turning really possessive and over-protective, as we saw with the damage he inflicted in ways he wouldn't normally.

Lovely ending.

I'm really glad to see more and more of Narcissa. And I'm glad this is going so well.

This story is very interesting! I haven't reviewed for a few chapters because all I can think about is the "Next" button.