Reviews for Sweet Lullaby
Guest chapter 5 . 3/3
At 18 months a baby should be able to eat whatever the rest of the family eat.
alinoe.kiara chapter 1 . 2/18
I was completely willing to suspend disbelief for the sake of plot (drugs shapeshing someone? OK, read and enjoyed such stories before) but I'm not willing to do it because of lazy writing. It takes about a minute of thinking to recognize that force feeding someone a pill in the middle of a chase is just plainly a bad idea and make it a stabbing with a syringe. And I found few of such blunders in first chapter alone. (Growing furniture? What does that have with biology? Scientists specialize, this random crap is just plain magic. Forcing vomiting works perfectly fine for pillsdigestion takes time. And I could go on...).
None of this things are necessary to the plot, they could be easily prevented by just taking a second look at the story.
Not going to read second chapter.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
amazing!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/3/2019
amazing
Guest chapter 6 . 10/3/2019
cute!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2018
Really of putting him stil talking like an adults really takes away from thr fact his "im a toddler body" either go all the way or dont bother!
Guest chapter 18 . 2/5/2018
Wow they have not got much faith in Gibbs looking after tony have they, he's the only one who’s been a dad, would love to see tony n Gibbs interact more without the others around,
Guest chapter 27 . 10/8/2017
JG
I read a few reviews. Scotland is in Great Britain. Great Britain is in the UK. So Ducky can be Scottish and British, but never English. Like being Texan and American, but not Californian.
Porridge is usually made with rolled oats cooked in milk or water according to individual taste.
I don't believe that a couple of smacks is child abuse. I do think that Gibbs would have been facing charges for beating up the prisoner.
I have heard of plaster and/or cast but never pot.
Some amusing bits. Lot of AU.
Guest chapter 24 . 9/20/2017
Why is it only Mcgee he does it too he should do it to Kate too
Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2017
This would of been so much better if adult tony went with the adult body abd he was just a normal baby i think him talking and thinking like his adult self really ruins the whole vibe of him actually being a toddler
Leslie Hughes chapter 25 . 7/31/2017
I love the stories with Gibbs and baby Tony or baby Tim. Gibss is always so good with the kids. TOo bad Tony doesn't have a relapse back to a baby...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
This story was amazing Gibbs went to far when he spanked baby Tony
Dani for Jesus chapter 27 . 4/12/2017
I loved reading Sweet lullaby meanwhile I'm reading Childhood Dreams
Dani for Jesus chapter 27 . 3/15/2017
I loved reading Sweet lullaby now I'm reading childhood dreams
Guest chapter 11 . 11/18/2015
I'm sorry, but Gibbs went to far when he spanked baby Tony. Tony is already having nightmares from the times his own father hit him. Gibbs could have tried another method to discipline a baby that has already suffered the affect of abuse. Tony is mentally scarred by the abuse in his childhood, so a spanking would only make it worse. When Gibbs hit him, he would have relived the trauma of his youth.

In real life, Tony would become afraid of Gibbs. My father did the same thing to my brother, and my brother was afraid to come near my father. He had to rebuild his trust all over again.

This not discipline; it's abuse because Tony is too small to be hit. He not even two, and he just started walking two days ago. A baby should never be hit repeatedly. Think before you write.
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