To be honest, this story was ultimately very disappointing. You are an excellent writer, but your plot is severely lacking. There is no conflict, no complication to overcome, no danger, and no character growth. Nothing ever goes wrong, and there's just no true depth to the story without conflict. Everything is too perfect and any potential problems too easily overcome. You got rid of so much of the canon plot that sucked, but you didn't add in new elements to replace them. There's no real point to this story.

So far, this story is interesting and very well written. I was quite upset that you changed Esme's name to Esmerelda, since that's completely wrong. Also, I cannot stand the repetition of "baby" and "sweetheart" from Bella. Just the idea of Bella ever calling Edward "baby" is a turn off for me. It's really not suited for their characters at all. However, this is obviously not an Edward/Bella story true to their canon personas. They are both OOC to the extreme. It's still enjoyable to read, and like I said, you are a fantastic writer. I only wish you would go back and get rid of all the "baby" and other nicknames. I like when Edward calls Bella "love," but none of the others.

Hey this was one of the best fan fiction I read. It's sad to see the story didn't come to fruition though. Hope the author is doing well and will finish it sometime soon.

So evil to abandon this great story on such a cliff hanger. Really, it's a great story and I would love to see where you were planning on taking it.

This is one of the best fics I've read in fifteen years. Please come back to it!

Wow incredible writing, I loved Rosalie's monologue on the downsides of being a vampire, it was better explained than SM did. I also thought it was funny when Esme thought Ed finding his mate meant changes to her Connecticut house plans.

Really neat to read a fic where Edward can read Bella's mind!

Gah! I’ve devoured this over all of my free time for
the last three days. PLEEAAASE tell me you have been
working on it?! I flippin’ love it!
*huggles*
Mary

Love the story, were you ever planning to finish?

Just found this story and your writing is amazing . Love your twist on the cannon so far

I just read this for the third or fourth time, I sure wish you would continue it. You are a very good writer, and I would love to see what comes next.

I can't wait for another chapter. I'm dying over here lol, great work, I have fallen completely in love with this story.

You were right! Its not 2 and a half years, it's been 5 yrs! Lol I really hope you haven't given up.

i like that you're differencing the accents of those areas and countries... mine would be closer to Peruvian... and darn, talking about idioms... the oh so beautiful Edward talking like a "paceñofrom la paz, boliviawell educated people try not to) ... EW... NO... idioms and accent here are too coarse and awful for this guy...

Eventhough i am sure this wonderful story is abandoned i keep coming back because it really is one of the greats