I realize that I'm over 10 years late XD , but I just found this story and I am speechless and breathless... This. Is. Magnificent. :O

I love this story! When I searched for it again, I realized I hadn't reviewed it. I love getting the outsider's view on the Pevensies through Caspian this way. I love the descriptions 'judgment like a hammer' and 'joy like a weapon' for Edmund and Lucy, and the the comparison between Susan and Edmund and Peter: 'power in every move he makes... hammered steel and dark resolve and Aslan's will, and how he doesn't need a sword to be a weapon.' This is excellent!

That is just . . . awesome.

"Peter holds his power in every move he makes, in the way he is hammered steel and dark resolve and Aslan's will, and how he doesn't need a sword to be a weapon.'

Awesome.

Wow, just... really loved your imagery here. Your descriptions of the Penvensies and their struggles with their roles and ages are better described than I've seen anyone describe them before. Peter... well you certainly capture the High King. So, a few favorite lines:

(Peter holds his power in every move he makes, in the way he is hammered steel and dark resolve and Aslan's will, and how he doesn't need a sword to be a weapon)

"Peter is Narnia"- I feel this is very fitting, with the connection between Peter and Cair Paravel

Peter is whole again now, and every time Caspian looks at him he feels he should be kneeling before the awful majesty of the King of Summer, unfolded now before them all.

-I love this description. The power, the awe, the fear, all of the things that make Peter Magnificent. Kind of that whole nice people don't make history sort of thing and it shows Peter at a height of a sort of power.

All in all, I enjoyed this short fic a lot

Wow. That was an epic story.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Beautifully written, and a pleasure to read. Well-done!

Good one-shot, Beth! I like it!

Aslan's Blessings,

~Fierce

Stunning.

loved it!

loved it!

Aw! That was so sweet! I LOVE it!

Gosh, this was so cool! Seeing how Caspian views the Pevensies, in such an elegant, perceptive way, it's beautiful! U

I LOVE his insights concerning Peter, especially, how he isn't angry toward him for the things he's done or the way he's acted. :) That's nice of him, that he doesn't hold it against him. U

Rock on! The small insights into Edmund, Lucy, and Susan were gorgeous, too; you captured them perfectly, and I loved it when Su was compared with Ed! Really, they are quit alike, and they don't get enough credit for it! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

This was spectacular, seriously, a work of magic, no WORDS of magic, it was spellbindng seeing into Caspians thought and how he sees the Pevinses, and Peter. Wonderful.

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beautiful.

you characterized peter so wonderfully!

i adore this.

it's just so short, is all. ) :

still, you are so good at describing people.

kudos for you,

aliki.

Great Story! Really enjoyed it!

Fighting for His glory,

HisWarrior

I really liked this story, my only problem is that it is so short. Even though Peter is my favorite I will suggest that you continue with Caspian's views on the other siblings.