Just reread your story. absoloutely amazing plot and characterisation. You have a real way with words which carries you along even though you know the ending

Thank you

At the end... but I don’t want it to end! T.T

Another fantastic job. As I stated before, that mix of fact with fiction is magical. Lol

12/10

o.o...

O right forgot to say

“by the way, why would they sweet for bugs in the office and then not at the house... the SAFE HOUSE... *smh*”

I mean yeah they thought that one guy was sweeping it they now have reason to question everything he did there...

ANYWAY fantastic story. You deftly tackled one extremely hard plot.

O I forgot to say something on a previous comment you said somewhere... I love that you mix solid facts with it. It makes the fiction almost believable and your mind is seeing the masterpiece your painting with the words. *sighs happily*

Ok I’m continuing on the track now. That sudden dive is coming, I just know it. XD

Yeah! Top emotional of the roller coaster!

T.T

Cheering for the first bit of “good” news

I’ll tell ya what surprised me: the HOW.
Nice plot twist!

This bad... no! Even though I knew he’d have to stay for the meeting it doesn’t mean I have to like it!

.. ooof COURSE they need you to get a look! .

Aaaaaaannd crud.. there goes the hope of keeping cover...

So yeah yet again once I start actually reading I’m just flipping pages before conscious thought. Lol. Jumping back on the ride now! Just thought I should try to “review” sometime before the end. (Before I forget)

I’ll sign in later (maybe). Just wanted to say you are STILL my favorite Numb3rs fic writer. I don’t know how but even the tedious “boring part” you keep my attention. You get all the little “jokes” (quotes cause it’s not SPOSED to be funny. I’m the weird one who laughs in dramatic/tense moments) that seem to be in crime/law and made it better cause now your not JUST watching it. *sighs happily*

I know I’m late (lots of reasons) but I’m back for now. Including this one I have 3 stories left. (VERY happy to find a new story!)

Well I’m continuing now! Sorry in advance if I forget to review in favor of turning the page!

~Panthera

Wow what an awesome story! The angst-levels were perfect and I thought you wrapped up all the important plot points pretty neatly by the end. I can't wait to read your other stories!

Ah, this is the worst. In a good way, lol. I love angst, I love physical angst (broken bones, blood and bruises etc. Yeah, I'm the worst, but I love even more the aftermath of it all, the happy ending or working toward it. And of course, the relationships of the characters in the story), but the worst (and best?) kind of angst is the kind that's emotional and mental. This certainly hits almost all on the list of things to angst about.

Love this story.
I was riveted throughout and almost went to work late on several occasions.
Thank you for sharing your talent.

Fantastic story so well written. The characters were excellently portrayed

YAY! AWESOME!