Reviews for The Price
senneth.pendra chapter 1 . 5/8
This is a beautiful story. The first of yours I have read so far but most definitely not the last.
loubu202 chapter 9 . 4/15
I love it when you mentioned Japanese tradition in the story and used traditional names for them, it's fitting with the story’s background and pretty informative.
loubu202 chapter 9 . 4/15
While reading, I always misread from Sha to She or vice versa
Evil Illusions chapter 20 . 11/24/2019
This was very well written and paced. Your OC's a fully developed and I love Buyo, Tsugane and Tenmaru so much :) Thanks for the read!
Evil Illusions chapter 6 . 11/23/2019
I love Sesshoumaru's sons and also some good old fashioned jealous Inuyasha.
Rachael Shannon chapter 20 . 9/23/2019
I am so happy I found your fan fiction! I was utterly hooked at the start and I love Miss Buyo. But that last line in Epilogue made me cried hard. Looking for her reincarnation, ugh my heart!
Golden Tiger93 chapter 16 . 5/12/2019
Inuyasha, never say what can go wrong. (shakes head at him)
Guest chapter 20 . 2/8/2019
Not sure how I have never seen this fic until now... So well written and lovely characterizations! Definitely one of my favourite AU's. Sess and Rin's sons were so cute I love them.
MamaBearKat chapter 20 . 10/24/2018
...sigh... I wasn't ready to leave yet. I feel like I've been thrown backwards out of a dimension of your creation without properly saying goodbye. I loved everything about this story, apart from wanting it to go on longer. I wanted to see them happy for longer. Thanks so much for writing this, I will definitely be back to read it again.
Cstorm86 chapter 20 . 10/14/2018
This was fantastic. I loved the idea and it was so will written.
iChaos chapter 20 . 7/23/2018
That was an absolutely marvelous story. It was definitely one of the most creative and original concepts of fanfiction that I have ever read, and that is saying something.

Your singular ability to balance the aspects of exciting action/adventure with heart-wrenching angst and nearly terrifying suspense is easily amongst the most intense I have seen. This particular story came about as close to my personal threshold for karmic balance as I can possibly imagine without actually tumbling over the precipice of true horror and/or irrevocable tradgedy.

Thank you so much for sharing.
NS chapter 20 . 1/28/2018
This was just amazing... really I don’t know what else to say. I enjoyed it immensely. Fantastic work by you and your Beta readers. So well done that I can’t stop gushing. This is going down as one of my all time favorites.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/19/2017
This was so much fun to read! My only hang up was an aspect of reincarnation, particularly with regards to kagome. Your epilogue insinuates that once kagome dies and is reincarnated, inuyasha would look for her, however that kinda messes wit the whole 'Kagome was born for me and I was born for her' spiel - that specific combo of soul/body/charcter/personality is what distinguishes kagome from kikyo, and what makes the inukag pairing/dynamic endgame. I guess for me, going after someone for the sake of thier soul and attempting to make a life with the reincarnation of your dead wife is contrary to what makes inukag special to begin with - would inuyasha ever have fallen for kagome if her personality was a 180 from what we see in cannon? Would he have fallen for her if she wasn't kikyo's reincarnation (or loved kagome in spite of it)? I dunno, I guess you've taken some poetic license here and incorporated the idea of a soulmate as a key factor in the reincarnation process - not sure if 'inuyasha' really explored this, like, if kagome was reincarnated as a wasp, would inuyasha still go for her in that state for the sake of reuniting with his soulmate? It's late and none of this is cohesive thought but eh whatevs..

That being said, this is AU and I dare say your interpretation of reincarnation in this story is probs more similar to real world ideology.

Major props all the same, this was so enjoyable and I LOVED your OCs. There were moments where i genuinely loled. You could tell you loved these characters and treated them so well in this fic.
zye1 chapter 20 . 6/29/2017
Wow... I don't know why I kept passing up reading this story. I guess it's because initially thought it was going to be like the anime but just set in modern times. And I didn't want to read what I've already watched. In a way it is but also it's so much more than that. I like the interaction between the characters, and the storyline after Naraku. A bit bummed sango and Miroku were not included but the tie in was a nice touch. Was hoping for Kagome to ask for shas parents pictures and make the connection but it wasn't included. Guess Might have been too weird. At least sesshy knows. All in all I'm glad I read this. Should have read it sooner. Good story and another added to my faves.
zye1 chapter 17 . 6/28/2017
The conversation about the panther youkai made me laugh. Lol like the brothers relationship in this story.
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