I thought I was the only one who was sure this was gonna happen! Thank you for writing this!

Nice. Good story.

The story is awesome but has no point

HOLY COW!

On a fanciful whim I happened to see if had any fiction based on webcomics and not only is The Dreamer here, we've got an excellent writer for it, too!

This is great and I love how perfectly easily this could have gone from Mrs. Innes pages. Excellent.

Beautiful! I love that you kept them true to character. So many times, people warp the character's personalities to fit into their story, but you clearly built the story around the characters. It's just a little extra piece that could realistically fit into the series.

I really like that you stayed true to their characters instead of just making them jump in bed together.

It feels like this truly could have been a scene from the comic. Great job!

Ah! Just started reading The Dreamer...this is lovely!

That's exactly what I thought would happen!

Great work!

ok...I LOVE THIS! WILL YOU PLEASE MAKE MORE! And maybe from Alan's Perspective?

Aww. That was adorable. Nice job.

D yay! that was lovely. Alan's amazing. It was too short but that's okay..it left me wanting more

This is too cute!

I like the idea of her yanking the bedcovers to her chin to appease him. It suits her her dramatic side, and of course, her wanting Alan nearby.

And I like seeing both perspectives, how she needs his help, but his reluctance.

Love it!

omishiloh

Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

~HGT

So cute! I loved how you handled them.

And Re No Answers from Mrs. Innes: LOL.

I am a HUGE fan of The Dreamer, and I was thinking (hoping) something like this would happen! We think alike, and it's well written. Yay!