AMAZING! I laughed at the part where the girls had to sit on Edmund! :)

beautiful. keep writing, owl's pen, and may the lion keep and guard you. bless you! keep writing! :)

Aww that was so sweet! Love the relationship between these two

Edmund Pevensie, Definition:
Brother, friend, king, advisor, hero..and official chair for the queens to sit on to watch duels

Awww, that was so cute!

I loved the story. The idea of the Queens sitting on Edmund, and Lucy even forbidding him to dream of duels! Hilarious. But I also loved your writing style and the seriousness of the problem at hand you added to the epigrams so that the plot wouldn't be too boring. Amazing job!

I really really liked it, I also would have liked a little more of Edmund's dialogue during the negotiations but it was still really impressive all in all!

This story is so awesome! I laughed so much!

A couple of my favorite parts:

"Fine." Peter nodded at Lucy and Susan, pointing his sword at their brother. "Sit on him."

"Wha-!"

Whump!

And...

"I said get off!"

Peter sighed. "Edmund, for the last time: shut up."

I also liked how you killed the Calormene off...Peter killed him but it wasn't all graphic.

This is really good! I love it!

i hope you'll write prequel for this story!

You got peter and Edmund very nicely. Good story.

Great brotherly bonding. I'd pay good money to witness Susan and Lucy sitting on an irate Edmund. Thanks.

This was wonderful!

I laughed out loud when the girls sat on Edmund. :D

Very wonderful!

I think everyone plays favourites, and Ed is one of those natural born favourites, Lucy too in many ways. Of course I'm biased because they are my favourites. this is a really good story.

-Dyslexic Nerd