A number of grammar issues, but a good story none the less.

Remember: than is used for comparisons (I like potatoes better than carrots), and then is used for sequence of events (first one, then two, then three). Throughout this story, you used than instead of then.

And in the very first sentence: threw is the past tense of throw. Rose was looking through some books, not threw.

I think there may have been other issues with things like its (showing possession) instead of it's (short for it is), but like I said, still a very enjoyable story.

Love the toaster bit!

Love It!

AWESOME! I hope you write more!

That was great, don't know why but I've been wanting to read a fanfiction about someone walking in on someone else. Anyways, where's the scarf?

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Great story. I liked the way everything played out, though I'm really surprised it ended how it did. I didn't expect the morning after to be so...simple. Then again, it is nice to change things up a bit. So many stories either have them proclaiming their love, or the Doctor just feels guilty and it gets a little angsty before they then proclaim their love.

You've got a consistency problem, Rose was described as wearing jeans, pants (which usually implys that its not jeans), and a skirt, in that order, with no points in between where she might have gone and changed.

oh Good show Rose! I so would LOVE to see a sequel to this one! Wonder how the Doctor is going to like the Married life again :) Somehow I suspect he will just love it right up to the point Jackie regenerates him for marrying her daughter and not inviting her to the wedding.

Whoa! That was great! I enjoy it so much :) Any chance of a sequel?

*grins*

Well, I had fun reading it. It was sexy and naughty and they really should have known better... always lock your door when Jack is on the same planet. I love the Doctor just deciding that Jack would have to be killed. That's brilliant. And Rose singing "Santa, Baby" was genius. I really think this was a LOT of fun. Especially Rose not letting him apologize or some other stupid Time Lord something. *grins*

THANKS!