I jut want to say that somewhere over the rainbow was probaly may favorite fanfic so I agree with mario, and this fanfic is pretty funny as well

I have a suggestion: They can travel to Fort Francis, and Franics himself has gotten the job of keeping the envelopes/clues/whatever away from the teams, and the longer Francis keeps it away from the teams, the more rewards Francis get. (Rewards like rare butterflies, video games, action figures...)
Oh, and he can have learned how to climb walls.

Very different compared to the real TAR, which is really cool.

One of my favorite parts was the Top Chef Master competition... Top Chef is one of my favorite shows. (I haven't seen it in a while, but I hope to find it soon)

Goombario and Goombaria was a cool team, so was Mimi and Merlee. Now I am cheering on for Peach and TEC, Koops and Parakarry, and Flurrie and Ms. Mowz.

The best part in this episode was the "Special Advantage" for finding the badge.

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Champ 15

Yay! I was so happy to find the notice for another chapter in my inbox! X3 Another hilarious chapter! Aww, too bad Timpani and Blumiere had to leave though. TT Oh well, all but one group are going to get dropped eventually! I can't wait for more! Oh, and the ending to this one was fine. :3

Oh my goodness, I another chapter! YAAAY! 8DDDD I laughed at SO many things. Parakarry's comment on the secrets, DDR, Dimentio's fourth wall line... just to name a small few. XD I, too, hope you churn up the next chapter soon! And I just might go read some of those fics you so shamelessly advertised. XD

Wow, 10 months, huh? dang! The story lives!

Anyway, lol that the Conductor loves my story...and grilled cheese. :D I heard that "somewhere Over the Rainbow" was a great fic, but I've only been able to read the first chapter...I'll get around to it eventually!

Lessee...Dupreee afraid of ghosts (awesome) a cooking contest (Goombario cooked a mistake!) and now a scavenger hunt that potentially has something to do with the "L" Emblem? Sweet!

Nice story!

Dude, this story ROCKS! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm hanging in suspence! Don't make me wait too long, please! Oh, did I mention this fic rocks?

~Gir Crazy ;3

Ah, I love that Tuna-Whale...and I love the mystery! And don't worry- I'm good at being pateint. ;)

P.S. remember that trip i mentioned? Well, I was able to come back early and I found this in my inbox! Talk about awesome! :D

You've got a good thing going so far! It actually helped tame my moderate boredom syndrome. I'm looking forward to more! (No matter how long it takes! It gives me something to look forward to)

wow! this story is amazing! i love the pairs

its so hard to find good paper mario stories nowadays :P

Very interesting to see who will finish in first at the end!

And of course, comedic. I eagerly await more.

Good start, I see your staying true to the show you are basing your story off of. I wish you had put a few more well-known characters in here (I've never played SPM), but I do recognize most of the characters in the race. I'm interested to see where you go with this...update soon, please.

And please check out my story, The Great Espiritu, as I have unfortnuately been receiving very little reviews.

Not bad. Although it's only an intro chapter. Strange pairings, and I would think Kooper would have a different personality. Oh well, it's your story.