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Atwiggs chapter 1 . 3/8/2018 Hopefully Edward will take care of her, but Jasper tried his best lol! |
athome Jo chapter 10 . 6/25/2017 These outtakes are fantastic! |
Bandgeek103em chapter 10 . 5/21/2015 Wow. The Unravel drabble really hit close to home... On a happier note, you are an awesome writer; you capture the individual voice of each character very well! |
nofcksgiven chapter 5 . 10/25/2013 Emmett and Rosalie are just too yummy! |
irelandk chapter 10 . 4/16/2011 Please don't drop this story - of all the fan fiction I've read this story really sticks with me and I would love to read more of it. |
myvice chapter 10 . 12/21/2010 Thank you for the a/n addressing jootg's completion. As I bide my time reading other stories, my mind always eventually returns solely to jootg. I reread it every couple of months or so. I patiently await the next facet you will add to the already delicate balance you have so eloquently created with the characters and storyline. I envision a balance scale or a child's see saw. With every new chapter, weight is added to one side and they spend the rest of the time methodically righting themselves and seeking equilibrium that most find naturally. I love the pride they feel as they accomplish these little feats, until the next chapter. Best of luck in your literary endeavors, whether you decide to finish or not. Thank you for the experience. |
gitgit chapter 10 . 12/12/2010 i hope you accomplished alot with the nano contest and im glad jasper punched the wall and scared jessica what a cow I'm going to go back and reread all the chapters you have posted for the story :D |
sapphicist chapter 10 . 11/21/2010 Hey, loved the outtake. I was also wondering when you guys would update Exposure? I'm addicted to that story. :D |
sessahhh chapter 10 . 11/21/2010 Good job. We needed a little bit of reminder for this story. I'm glad to hear you plan on finishing. I guess we all just want it now and that is not possible for writers who have actual lives out of FF. Thanks for taking the time to create and share with us these little drabbles. They make it easy to see the love and devotion of a best friend trying to deal with so much. |
jilburfm chapter 10 . 11/18/2010 so sad, so good. I'm actually impressed that he didnt punch Jessica after hearing that comment. |
mllebojangles chapter 10 . 11/12/2010 you know i love any little tidbit i can get of this story! love these ... can't wait for more from you! |
cindysark chapter 10 . 11/12/2010 This absolutely broke my heart. I love Jasper's friendship for Bella in this fic almost more than her relationship with Edward. It was what drew me to it in the first place and my heart broke for both of them to get this little glimpse at how much they went through. I can't wait for more of JOotG, but good luck with NaNoWriMo! |
bmango chapter 10 . 11/10/2010 poor jasper dealing with his own crazy emotions over bella's rape, and not really having anyone to turn to but the guys. hugs all around. and i hope RL and FF and everything settle down for you soon. hugs and kisses, b |
missdaine chapter 10 . 11/10/2010 Id just like to say that I love jotg but this particular part really got to me. My best friend went through absolute hell and I have been there right there for the past two years and I still am. People don't realise the anxiety and stress it can cause when someone you love has been so broken. How gut wrenching and heart breaking it is to see them go through it... I have lost it several times... Your an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. |
greeneyedgirly chapter 10 . 11/9/2010 Really, really nice drabbles. I haven't pm'd you or anything asking you when you were planning on updating because I don't like to bother authors for updates, but I have always been keeping this story close to my heart and everyday I hope to hell to see an update on it. I loved this POV from Jasper and it's reminded me just how much I can't wait to read more of the real story. Thanks for sharing this with us! |