Reviews for Fate's Revenge
Guest chapter 3 . 9/23/2019
Oh how I wish you had finished this.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2018
Daggummit. Why didn't you finish this very interesting tale?
Corwyn chapter 3 . 4/7/2016
I'm enjoying this story so far and hope you get a chance to continue it.
Mythicall Moon chapter 3 . 1/4/2016
Why don't you continue this curious story... I would like to see how Harry meets Hermione.

I suspect that Sean's "friend studying Ancient Egyptian magic in Cairo" is Bill Weasley. Am I right?
god of all chapter 3 . 10/22/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Paddybee chapter 3 . 4/12/2014
1 'moot' point not 'mute' point -mute means unable to speak,to be dumb. (English dumb, not stupid)
2 could HAVE played American football, not could 'of' played

3 the word gotten should be avoided like the plague. Use received, obtained etc.

Otherwise seems interesting so far
Charmedfanforeva chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
Love this story. Sad to see you haven't updated in quite a while. I have always liked stories where Harry is rescued as a youngster. Hope you are going to finish this some day. Would be sad if you didn't. I hope there will be Dumbledore bashing.
wpl chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
enjoyed wished there was more.
NewFanFictionFan chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
A good start on this story. Its very interesting and I would like to see it continue. I hope that your personal life opens up and provides enough time and motivation to allow you to complete this srory.

Best of luck.
Carl
NFFF
Keena3105 chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
are you going to be continuing this story?
Runecutter chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
A very sympathetic Ms Weasley you've described here, even her suicide was rather convincingly described. Then she gets sent back, finds herself in a completelly foreign surroundings and masters it... yes, i like the plot a lot... maybe not the part where she gets started in her new life and so much is explained and prepared for her, but if you don't want to "go in cold" and show Rose living the new life without too much memories of the old life using flashbacks to present what little information about the reasons for her mission and the backgrounds of her objectives, this is probably the least annoying way to do it. Still it had a lot of the mandatory shopping spree sequence of similar stories or "independent Harry" ones which also tries to kickstart a whole narration in a single chapter and therefore more often than not fails it's task...

But at least it's over soon and after Harry comes to her it's once again a solid and cunning narration with a lot of detail invested into the telling of the story... The medical examination was a brilliant scene and the healer is a nice OC whom one believes the level of professional knowledge he demonstrated.

Well a pity you never managed to find Hermione and introduce her to Harry and her never-to-be daughter (of course in this story the probability that any daughter Harry and Hermione will conceive in the far distant future will be named after the nice lady that rescued Harry from his vile relatives and showed them both the wonders of the magical world so Rose will live on in another Rose... maybe even literally? 38 is not too old to be pregnant and bring a new life into this world and Rose has got the promise she would only become 50 in this life... ), the beginnings of the story were very enjoyable and seeing it continued would be fun!
Danyael Prince chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
It really is too bad that this fic seems abandoned. :(

It had a lot of potential.
monbade chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
good start, any more coming?

monbade
Potter Abducted by Penguins chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
This is another of your stories that I would really like to continue to read! Please start updating again soon!
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
An interesting story but I find it sad to think Hermione would do that with the effect on her daughter. I gather for the blood ward to be recharged Harry would have to regard this as his new home and be with a blood relative which would mean that Rose is his daughter. Ron will always be the bad guy as he never grew up and Hugo was on his way to the same life.

Your story has good future as you already know that Dumbledore and Molly are bad and manipulative and with Molly, Ron and Ginny do not have a chance.

So when does Harry meet Hermione?

Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
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