I'm quite surprised by how much can be said in 55 words... if you keep it canon, so readers have a strong context.

1. I like emibella's Marcus piece the best. The last sentence is just extremely funny.

2. Ava, your Rosalie piece is awesome. It conveys Rose's disdain for Bella. I love how tightly it's woven, with references to heaven, angels and the end of the world.

3. "You've kept me waiting"- again Ava's piece grabs me. I think that's really how he felt!

Wow! That's so awesome! And what fun, to see what each of you brings to the table and how different they all are.

I must say that siDEADde's "You've kept me waiting" offering struck me hardest. You know when there are times after reading something, when a gong sounds deep in your gut, and everything gets really quiet in your head, and the only stunned thing you can say is "hm." Or maybe that's just me...in any case, that's what it felt like. The rest were exceptional as well.

Awesome, ladies. Thanks for sharing this with the rest of us.

Haa I loved everyone of them! I especially loved your one from Rosalie's thoughts :)

I think that's a really good idea to 'tone up' writing skills :) though you're writing skills are already amazing beyond belief.

As always

~ Miss Lace