Aw...sweetness! :)

Such a great way to tell a story :) Really great!

Your one of my new favorite authors. :)

loveeeeeeeeeeeeee it!

AWWW! That was so cute and awesome! great work!

Aww. :)

This was very well written and was quite in character for both Obi-Wan and Anakin. I liked how you captured Obi-Wan's difficulty at expressing his emotions, and Anakin's frustration with this. Nicely done!

I love this story, and I love your writing. But what annoys me about the Jedi is how when someone has a deadly premonition they say to just leave it up to the will of the Force. Well, why did the Force show them that vision unless it wanted them to do something about it. Anakin should've went searching for his mother when his visions first started, and she would've lived, which is probably what the Force wanted. Stupid Jedi!

Eh, sorry for my rant. Good one-shot. :)

Very good describing of Anakin's Vision. I absolutely love your stories, and continue to read the rest of them. :D

Aww. This is really sweet. You're very good with writing emotions (especially Anakin's crazy ones). I really enjoyed the hurt/comfort, as well, and the in-character-ness and good writing and grammar. :) Thanks for writing this!

Aww-how sweet. Very nice & quite a lovely fic. I liked it a lot-no, I LOVED it. A sequel of some sort with maybe Anakin crying more and getting a hug would be awesome. You really did a good job despite a few grammar errors. Would like to see more:D

This was an excellent fic, h/c yes, and the prologue to the AOTC scene that seemed to put Ani and Obi on a true parent/child or Master/Padawan level. The emotions progressed well and I really liked the aspect of darkness, as that brought out the 'lowering of their guard,' so to speak.

Good job! You did a lovely job capturing the emotions.

Cute little story! I really liked it :)