I hate that Anita bitch!

it is awesome a little action

Ok, what happened? Going to check your other stories, maybe find a prequel? If not, can you write one?

I just thought that I would tell you that I really loved this story. I really liked the interaction between Charlie and Don. I would like to see more description, though. Perhaps you can add on to this story a little bit, tell why and how Charlie got kidnapped, and what happened in his captivity. It would make a fantastic story.

It was kinda random! When did Charles get kidnapped? All those technicallities. And, you should add more detail.

wow since when does a grown man call his grown brother baby. That is a term of endearmentused in a love relations or a parent term for child. I think that if you maybe got a beta an reworked it this could be perfect.

I read the summary and said to my self this should be good. clicked on it to read it. an then went please tell me this isn't it. 5 lines! I hope you redo it. it could be a lot more. I started reading it and about 5 seconds later I was done. I would definitly read it if you redo it.

This is a good idea but I don't think its been exsecuted the best way. 5 lines? This could be exspaned on hugely. I was vastly disappointed because I was reading it, liking it, then it waso ver before it really began. I truly hope you revise because this is one of my favorite tv shows and they need one like this with the brotherlyness.