I like the flow of this. Snape is nicer but his character doesn't change. It is closer to movie snape than book snape though which i personally prefer.

I loved your perspective in this story. refreshing!
Im sad to know that the author of this fanfic gone because of cancer. Even you cannot read all these reviews, just know that I am grateful for your writing.

sorry but this just lost all interest for me

i would think the black fmaily would have a bigger dark arts library

Yeah, I always took it that Lucius was saying he'd see Arthur at Arthur's work if he ever wanted to see him again. Like he is telling a neighbor who works in fast food they aren't his friend or welcome at his home. "See you at the drive through."

harry is a moron

i dont see a pureblood having a name like guy, sounds stupid to be honest, also a manor that is decently old, yet was only worth fifty thousand galleons? seems a bit low to me

i mean im no fan of snape, but he does have a point about james, in regards to harry's inheritance, which also brings up another point for me, how do they expect harry to continue the potter line when he doesn't have the money for a bride price? i mean for the purebloods, if harry ends up with a pureblood, im sure that is expected. he doesn't have the money. so james has essentially ended the potter line, he is a horrible father, and heir of a house

well james is a shit father

if albus isnt his guardian, then why is he receiving his monthly statements? also not a fan of the fact that you made james a money throwing idiot, because its his son who is just now turning eleven, that has to pay the price, yet nobody else bothered to help with the financial cost? thats wrong im sorry but thats so wrong

i think harry will be a ravenclaw or hufflepuff, i cant see slytherin, or gryffindoor, well maybe slytherin

technically snape said it twice

how is it absurd to spend money on an owl, when they literally use them for message deliveries, or sometimes spell work?

would they have even gotten money from the government because james most likely wouldnt exist in the muggle government, and lily would probably disappear after she turned 11, also i cant see the ministry paying for a half blood, maybe a pureblood, but not a half blood. unless it came from the potter vault

*chefs kiss*
That was a satisfying chapter. The catharsis. The karma. The only a little bit of cursing for emphasis. Just what I needed.

In other news I really liking just reading snapes opinions, being the sassy bitch that he is it's nice to get more of it. I also like that he doesnt have to be a good person to do the "right thing" and I think that's half the appeal of snape. The other half is being a sassy bitch.

Wonderful!