Reviews for Rapture
ConnietheCat chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
lol, Disco had in hair clips XD
Can you continue?
sonicfangirl321 chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
I think this story could be GREAT! But, I think more chapters should be put in it. HOPE TO READ MORE! XD
The Army Doctor chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Sorry I'm only just now reading this, but are you not goin to upload anymore chapters? I was looking forward to future chapters and decided to ask. Anyways, love the plot idea and the pairing, and it's beautifully writen, well done and if you could please update soon, I want more hehe :3
Guest chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
Disco Bear I think Cub wants you to be his Daddy instead of Pop!
That would mean Cub wants Pop as the Mommy!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
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Halloween2020 chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
Oh I love this story! your an awesome writer, please write more!
StutteringFreak chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
You're right, your english is really bad.

But the story is great and really cute:3 I'd love to see a third chapter:)
Jennifer the Dark chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Great story! I had to keep quiet because it was around midnight, but a few giggles still got past. I feel so sorry for Pop and Cub. I'd love to be a beta reader :D
Jennifer the Dark chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Great story! I had to keep quiet because it was around midnight, but a few giggles still got past. I feel so sorry for Pop and Cub. I'd love to be a beta reader :D
InvaderChubbs chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
I really, really hope you continue this story.

and I could suggest a few Beta Readers for you, although I highly doubt you need it. I was really impressed at how good this story was written, coming from somebody who doesn't know much English.
Kite chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
Lovely work friend update soon I really like the whole idea of this story it's so rare to find this fan pairing.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Poor Disco Bear. Usually I CAN'T STAND his habit of trying to get hooked up with a girl so he can... do "that" to them, IF you catch my drift, but in this case, I kind of feel sorry for him. Again, please do continue.
catgirl07 chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
XD your making me think about this pairing! Great job friend! your spellings not that bad so don't worry and your learning so you'll be fine.
Hanndy lover chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
Keep it up I can't wait to read more.
Bunny Girl chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
lmao flower clips! I love this story update soon! I'll be waiting.
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