Great

My word, that was lovely. Both so completely in character and extremely well written. So glad I stumbled across your Black Butler fics :)

The entire thing is a masterpiece. Thank you for presenting such a wonderfully human reaction from Ciel and an in character sequence for sebastian.

D'aww! I have yet to find a fic where SEBASTIAN is the hurt/weak one! This is so cute! Thanks so much for writing this! D

I've never even thought of their relationship reversed like this, but I really love it. This story's great! You kept everyone in character despite the fact that both Sebastian and Ciel felt out of their depths- Ciel because people take care of him and not the other way around, Sebastian because he's a demon and not used to anything resembling kindness without attempts to exploit his weaknesses. Then there's all the subtleties, the difference between humans and demons and the price paid to bring the two together. You fit so much in a situation that starts with spilled milk, and it's really impressive. Amazing work!

Wow, good job. this is the first fic I've come across where Ciel looks after Sebastian and not the other way around. I think you did a very good job. Well done.

And thanks for sharing.

- B~S T

It's hard to give Sebastian a weakness and keep him in character at the same time, but you DID, and it works beautifully! I love the subtle connection that's always between them, and you managed to make it show. My favorite part was the way Sebastian made Ciel feel mean without trying to...it was just so THEM, if you know what I mean, and so perfect.

LULS, I've never seen hurt!Sebastian before. I've never even FATHOMED it. :D It was making me squeal, until the end where it got sad.. but I liked this a lot! Good job. :)

:O...wow :) nice, and they are very in character, too!

This is actually quite sweet... A fantastic job!

uwha poor Ciel.

loved it

Great! I really liked it-I think you hit their characters really well! Will there be a second chapter?

Very nice, though mostly I don't like reading about Sebastion being anything but the hell of a powerful butler that he is, you managed to make me enjoy this scenario as well, good job .

I especially liked 'expression trapped between noble and mortified.'

I can totally imagine that, so funny!

Fairly believable situation and characterization-you show Sebastian in a slightly better light than the ruthless, scrupulous demon who we can never be sure is being truthful.

Very interesting story and writing style! Thanks for writing!

I liked it, it was different, and gave a new perspective on what happened after.