Cute short story. I love Hermione's thoughts. ;-) haha.

nice job. its not are a few odd very well done. its beter than i can do

ginnys's eyes are chocolate brown! not blue! just saying! :3

loved the ending!

great job )

I didn't expect them to be such a cute couple but they are...great job...they are so sweet about each oher!

kind of cute although the language sounds a bit choppy and stiff

What a wonderful way to welcome in the day, laughing and smiling from the pleasure of reading such a lovely little fic.

The last line in particular sealed the deal for me. Thank you for sharing.

Very cute story!

Not my type of story but yeah well written few spelling mistakes and a nice short story