Fantastic story! I wouldn't have minded a little more interest then but hey...either way glad to read complete fic so well written!

That was such a good story.

Good story. Liked it. Will look into what else you’ve written. Teenage me would hate me for saying this bu my only complaint would be there was way to much sex.

Like the story but the Asgard where gone by this stage.

Wow, this was just one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. You did such a great job here - let me say a well better job then the real writter, especially for my old worn-out sipper heart :) Thank you so much for it! :)

so, if they correct the timeline does that not mean that Jack will be dead again?

oh please let them keep Charlie. I hate that they can't keep the altered timeline. Little disappointed by that but I'll ride with it

Great story - much better than the movie but ofcourse that's because yours focused on Jack!

Well, colour me disappointed.

I don't know why it's so hard for people to admit that O'Neill and the people of his timeline have a point. Trying to set things back to what they think is right is at best supremely arrogant of SG-1 and at worst highly dangerous. I was looking forward to a fix that actually dealt with that question instead of dismissing it as foolish like the movie did.

But, nope, we get a deus ex machina that forces their hand instead.

Wow. One of the best fics I've read. The only issue I had was your use of 'then' when you should have been using 'than'. There is a difference. Then is used to indicate time, than is used in comparisons.

Very well done - would have prefered it more of a PG rating but still loved the whole story, I especially enjoyed the fact that it was a better Continuum than the movie as it focused on Jack and still had the Asgard :o)

This is just a great story... And your plot is waaaay better than the movie! I wish they had used your plot for real! :) great dislogues, wonderful discriptions and a perfect mix between the two. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this story here with us!
Hugs from Portugal, Celia

Oh my god that was amazing! This is one of the best Sam/jack stories I've read. It is definitely going in my favorites list so I can read it again. I loved getting inside their heads and getting to see a different side of jack that still felt like jack. I agree with one of the other reviews though, I would love to read the story of them continuing on the plane to Florida and seeing how things developed that way. Great job once again! Now I'm off to go read more of your stories (this was the first I think I've read from you).

I kind of want the story of them spending their lives together without Thor coming to get them. I know Baal would eventually come but I kind of want to read about them going to Florida and living together and him falling in love with her all over again. I love this story though and have read it multiple times. In fact I have read all of your stories a few times. I love them all and wish there were more. Keep up the good work.

this is one of the best Sam/Jack stories I've ever read. I like it so much that I read it several times a year! Just love everything about it :-)