Reviews for Monster
thegrison chapter 5 . 10/19/2019
What a waste of time reading this. Your story has such a very slow flow/pacing. I have seen slugs move faster. Your writing is much more a story of Naruto mind than anything else. It drags on and on in places vs continue with the story what little of it than is.
Monster King chapter 5 . 5/17/2019
Great job I hope you continue
Naruto Meowzers chapter 5 . 2/23/2019
This was a really interesting story, I enjoyed it. I think it's really how you've gotten Naruto and Itachi's paths to cross, I really wish you had finished it, but thanks for the great read.

Best wishes,
Naruto Meowzers
pikachucat chapter 5 . 3/23/2016
awesome more please
asdfasfdasfsa chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
i hope that you'll update soon, but this story is probably abandoned.

Anyways, I hope you'll update soon nonetheless.
The Shadow Spectre chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
Pweese update

Pweese
paracuties chapter 5 . 2/9/2014
I really enjoyed this last chapter! Loved how it was from Itachi's point of view!

Except. YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR YEARS. WHY did you stop?! This is an AMAZING fanfiction!

"Well, you'll find out more in future chapters :D"
HA. NO. Apparently not. I WANT TO KNOW MORE! I'm so disappointed!

Really good writing, though. I bet your writing is more than perfect, now.
Balfie chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Please update soon!:) Thanks.
Namikaze Inoue Orihime chapter 5 . 6/24/2013
This is awesome! Compared to my works...
Eldeweiss chapter 5 . 6/21/2013
Awesome story !
Can't wait for the next chapter
Eldeweiss
Alatariele C chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
(deep breath*)
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
If you didn't get it the first time, PLEASE UPDATE!

PLEASE... UPDATE...
Alatariele C chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
FAVOURITE FANFIC EVER OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
Alatariele C chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I... can't... I
(DIES FROM OVER EXPOSURE TO PURE WRITING GENIUS)
NoeticSky chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
UPDATE ONEGAI SHIMASU .

I NEED MORE
NoeticSky chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
The world is always in need of writers like you :)

Great chapters so far!

You need to get this finished! My life will be incomplete otherwise .
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