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thegrison chapter 5 . 10/19/2019 What a waste of time reading this. Your story has such a very slow flow/pacing. I have seen slugs move faster. Your writing is much more a story of Naruto mind than anything else. It drags on and on in places vs continue with the story what little of it than is. |
Monster King chapter 5 . 5/17/2019 Great job I hope you continue |
Naruto Meowzers chapter 5 . 2/23/2019 This was a really interesting story, I enjoyed it. I think it's really how you've gotten Naruto and Itachi's paths to cross, I really wish you had finished it, but thanks for the great read. Best wishes, Naruto Meowzers |
pikachucat chapter 5 . 3/23/2016 awesome more please |
asdfasfdasfsa chapter 5 . 6/9/2015 i hope that you'll update soon, but this story is probably abandoned. Anyways, I hope you'll update soon nonetheless. |
The Shadow Spectre chapter 5 . 2/8/2015 Pweese update Pweese |
paracuties chapter 5 . 2/9/2014 I really enjoyed this last chapter! Loved how it was from Itachi's point of view! Except. YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR YEARS. WHY did you stop?! This is an AMAZING fanfiction! "Well, you'll find out more in future chapters :D" HA. NO. Apparently not. I WANT TO KNOW MORE! I'm so disappointed! Really good writing, though. I bet your writing is more than perfect, now. |
Balfie chapter 5 . 7/24/2013 Please update soon!:) Thanks. |
Namikaze Inoue Orihime chapter 5 . 6/24/2013 This is awesome! Compared to my works... |
Eldeweiss chapter 5 . 6/21/2013 Awesome story ! Can't wait for the next chapter Eldeweiss |
Alatariele C chapter 5 . 5/25/2013 (deep breath*) PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE If you didn't get it the first time, PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE... UPDATE... |
Alatariele C chapter 2 . 5/25/2013 FAVOURITE FANFIC EVER OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG |
Alatariele C chapter 1 . 5/25/2013 I... can't... I (DIES FROM OVER EXPOSURE TO PURE WRITING GENIUS) |
NoeticSky chapter 5 . 2/5/2013 UPDATE ONEGAI SHIMASU . I NEED MORE |
NoeticSky chapter 4 . 2/5/2013 The world is always in need of writers like you :) Great chapters so far! You need to get this finished! My life will be incomplete otherwise . |