Continue please and add a separate yanagi renji story

Love the story, superb! I really hope that you could write a sequel, showing the start of their compani0nship and eventually their love story.

Wow... what a beautiful story... this really caught my heart. I honestly love how you wrote this story, like how the POV doesnt change. And though this is a simple story it has a very definite plot. Good start good end. The (im not sure...) last chapter where you contribute the piano and lyrics are fantastic. The words have a very deep meaning and contribute well into the song; I could hear it in my head. The OC's as well as ryoki have a well deceloped character :D

My opinion on the ending.. hmmm, i think its good that this didnt turn out a fall in and and happily ever after! Love the words u used "cirlce of companions" it really ties back to the first chapter and shows a new starting point with hmryoki and keigo. One thing does bug me. The line that talks about "cliche romance" it really ruins the tone of the paragraph. It kindof came out of nowhere and when i read just that sentence alone, it seems more of you the authors commentary/opinion then the character ryoki. Try readint that specific parafraph and see what its like because it seriously jist comes oit of nowhere.

(Sory for spelling/ grammer mistakes I wrote this on my phone :P)

haha, nice.

loved it too...Amazing..Again i smiled through it!

wah! I love it! please make a sequal about Ryoki and Atobe's love life! it's so swet! hehe lols sorry I just really liked that _

Ehh..

It was sweet

Who would've thought Alarm Clocks could be so dangerous? That was a good story!

aw

nice chapter! LOL ..alarm clocks are really dangerous!

better watch out!

YAY. YOU FINISHED. :D

HAPPY ENDING. :D YAY. XDD

I'm not gonna kill you, come on! XD Though the probability of my chucking an alarm clock at someone who tries to wake me up is very very high... XD (I've actually done it before.) XDD

ILY MICHY. 8D TIMES A SIDEWAYS 8. :D

-Ukyou :)

MUHAHAHAHA.

Now I will go and steal the song.

Nahh. jks )

zomg u updated XD

I got lazy.

Heh. I don't even wanna update nemore..

And i just realized that I still need to do "my version of ur story" or smth.

Keh... and I still need to do a story together w/a frd...

Yes I know i'm ranting on and on :] but it's kuz i havent talked to u for so long

Oh.. i just realized that i haven't said nething bout da chappy..

It's really good :D

and i agree that it's a bit short, but that's ohkay )

cause the song makes up for it

Omg, that's a beautiful and touching song. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

nice song update soon!

OMGOSH. Great chapter. I am so INCREDIBLY HAPPY you updated this! You need to make a new chapter ASAP. BE INSPIRED. INSPIRATION IS ALWAYS AROUND YOU IN MANY DIFFERENT FORMS! NICE LYRICS! You obviously worked hard. Great job! Good luck with the next chapter! Big Fan of all your works! BIG FAN. Update the rest if ever you have time. I'm rooting for yah!