Neku would be absolutely stupid to get together with Sho...I mean, I can't believe that, in the first chapter, Neku didn't even try to help Beat or stop Sho from raping him!

If he doesn't get together with Beat...I will be pissed because Sho is a complete and utter psychopathic asshole.

haha, the fact that I'm getting so into it though is proof that the story is good, irritated as I am by Neku's stupidity!

Wow, love this fic. Everything is written in such an amazing way. Once again I wanted to say that I love it~

T-thus story is... UNREAL,bro! Omg I totally loved thiss!

where is rhyme when all this is going on?

D: Darn it Sho! That's not what Nekus are for :

They're for loving, not taking over Shibuya (Again. ...Again-again?)

XD You can't do both!

Bwaah~ Can't wait for the next update

You sure make these things seem hot

Poor Beat though, even though he is evil

can't wait for the next one

i like this story very nice

hu's goin to win, i hope its beat

cant wait D

ohoh I was not expecting Beat rape... but a fan fiction could have anything right! I loved every of ounce of it, the details in the story (no... I meant the grammer :D), and how well you make the character themselves..and like not have a split personality. (plus the yaoi was good to...)

*steals Sho's megaphone* Hand that over for a moment... *yells into it* You factoring hectopascals! I demand you all read this story, or I will... Umm... Scream into your ears with this, thingermajig here?

Sho: ...Who the factor is this zetta crazy son of a digit? And why is she trying to copy the way I talk?

Neku: *shrugs*

*hits Sho upside the head with the megaphone by accident* Okay now that that urge has been rid of... This is another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work! *two thumbs up*

Sho: *trying to get close enough to strangle me but is getting pulled back by Neku* I'll factoring kill you! Lemme at her!

(Sorry... I couldn't resist the urge of taking Sho's megaphone and the whole RP skit crazy weirdness... You did awesome work on this, though!)

Hehe... Looks like I found you on yet another site, as I said before, this is a great story... Though, I really do feel bad for Beat... Don't worry, Beat, if I have to, I'll stash up some food in a backpack, and stay underneath your hospital bed, making sure Sho doesn't touch you again. I'll bring any other person who wants to go too, but Shirp doesn't have a choice, she's going with anyway. Muaha. XD

Can't wait for the next chapter! (If I sound like a loon again, please disregard it. It's natural. You rule! :D)