I say...you should 100% add another chapter to this~ I like your writting syle~ It has this flow to it. And I do love how both Norma's are basically the same. It's like "Yeah, once a Norma, always a Norma."

And poor, poor doubles with no clothes~

You know what? This actually made me go and google the game because it reminded me of another one~ (Totally addicted to Harvest Moon games, you see. The one you based it off of reminds me of it, a little anyways. )