Wow! It's been a long time! I really really really like this! Please! Keep writing! I'm so curious!

This is great.

I started reading today to get my mind off waiting for Al Prewett to continue and am all up to date. I like how you have built the story so that it frames around the Cannon, never putting in a thing that would contradict or compete with a pre-established event. Additionally, I enjoy your use of *very* peripheral characters like the founders and giving them personalities. Keep going!

I've been reading this story for awhile now, and really have never reviewed...so, here goes:

I really like it, Harry "Eccentric Aunt" (Oh, I don't know what else to call her XD) is a funny character that is mysterious, and has many flaws as she does good sides. Something I think you could improve on is the character of Harry, I mean your writing for him is good but, he just doesn't seem like Harry...

Other than that I really like this story, all the characters are well rounded, and I'm very much addicted to reading it.

-SS

Hey!

I love how each era starts with "i've been thinking"

I really really really adore this! and i can't wait for more!

Even though I've already read this, I must say it is quite amazing!

Sorry it took so long for me to read. I was at camp for two weeks. :P

How's your summer going?

update soon

HI!

I love this, even though I read it already. It's amazing!

And so is the next chapter if I remember correctly!

Dawnfire, I updated Jake Matthews on the sharing thing, so read that please! I need your input!

Hi DawnFire,

Only three words to say to you "BRILLIANT" and "PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING"(Or thats 4 words. I dont care actually). But I still think you are a brilliant writer and I am waiting for chapter 15 eagerly.

i really like your writing style. i mean, i even like reading your disclaimers, which is (believe me) a real achievement. i'm not so sure i like the plot in this story though ... but i'll keep reading it :)

update soon

I actually hadn't read this chapter yet!

I love it! :D

But I already guessed the time period. I am just soo smart like that! :D

haha, I might go see Star Trek again tomorrow. lols. Anyone who reads this, GO SEE IT! It's really good and Captain Kirk...*censors thoughts*

Back to your story Dawfire, PLEASE update Al Prewett soon! Like, really, and update this too!

and call me when you get this!

and People! please read and review my story!

Great chapter. Guinevere

Am I your seussical friend? :D out of curiousity.

Anyhoo, I've read this chapter already, so i shall repeat myself in saying that the twins are just soo awesome, its awesome.

Great chapter. I think though that describing Fawn Silver as 'interesting' is definitely an understatement. 'Mysterious' is a good word.

Still loving this!

Can't wait for more!