| Reviews for LaterNever |
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Touwa chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 This is a masterpiece. I was enjoyed reading LaterNever. I was cheking your profile but seems this is the only fanfic SasuNaru you have. :( You are a good writer. And I hope you keep writing about these two! ;) |
Katie.Madison chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 Beautiful. Stunning. Romantic. Intelligent. Man, if only the actual fandom had this many subtle nuances. The way you've played everything out makes so much more sense than what's going on right now, in fact. Anyway, that's another rant for another day - thanks so much for posting this lovely piece of work. I'll be sure to check your profile for other fics:) |
riding-the-wind chapter 1 . 9/20/2011 This is a cute story, it's sweet and simple. I love all the detail and the whole comparison of "later" and "never" I really love this story, great job. |
swafford duh chapter 1 . 12/15/2009 OH MY GOD This was so intense and sad and I don't know what else! |
LittlePorcelain chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 Wow, that was really good. |
yaoihime22 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009 this is a very sad story |
esotericangel chapter 1 . 3/21/2009 absolutely gorgeous fic! there is nothing in this story that i disliked: the characters were all in character, the pov was flawless, i didn't notice any grammatical errors, the story flowed beautifully, i could go on for hours ) keep up the good work!kudos and applause. |
LeMerrie chapter 1 . 3/9/2009 That was...really...bittersweet T_T oh my...now I have very large lump in my throat... I'm really torn! I have no idea how I'm supposed to feel about this fic. I honestly can't tell if I should burst into tears or smile like a goon... I'm such a mess over this... Thank you anyways, even though you did succesfully and thoroughly turned my feelings into a big puddle of unidentifiable goo, it was still well written and very heartfelt. |
OrangeSpiral chapter 1 . 3/9/2009 oor poor naruto , i do like this story though so keep up the good work :) |
5Angel chapter 1 . 3/8/2009 Wow, is this gritty realism? I have to say this is the first time I have ever liked Kakashi in any fic. He wasn't spewing philosophy he just was, philosophical :) I'm glad I read this, thanks :) |
DixieDiamond chapter 1 . 3/7/2009 This is such a beautiful story. I love it. It made me want to smile and cry at the same time. Lovely. :) |
Whyisntthereadeleteaccount chapter 1 . 3/7/2009 I have tears in my eyes from the WHOLE story. I... really liked this story. LaterNever is great and the consept of the differences between them are well thought out and everthing. Good job. |
vaughnrock chapter 1 . 3/7/2009 This was really good. I really enjoyed it Vaughn |
Kyoxha chapter 1 . 3/7/2009 Alright, I'm going to read and review so i don't lose my thoughts. I do it for everyone _. When does this take place via anime? just wondering if u could put the setting above the chapter. if not, that's cool too but I'll question it, i think. HAHAH! XD I laughed when u wrote 'darling' of the village! LOL, that girly-man dude-chick-woman-girl-boy...SUPER LOL! XXD I like how u describe a lot before you get to any talking. I hardly ever do it and I like the way it looks. That's a good thing. Please keep it _. Of course...i hope it's not TOO long... O_O two paragraphs above the sentence "The Valley of the End was not a "never." It was a later." " is like FRIGGEN awesome and loaded with MEAANING! DX AARG, must know more! oh...oh. i think i know the timeline, now. Wow, playing chest with Kakashi? hmm, i figured he woulda done it with Shikamaru *shrugs* I'm curious now. Hmm...u write a little too present tense. Like when u said, 'Kakashi asks as nonchalantly as he can.' I mean, he already DID it. that's a sentence where no matter what, it's PAST tense... Orochimaru owns the Akastuski? O_O WTF did I MISS? Aw man _ |