Way to kill a story in the first chapter.I hate OCs in the first chapter who I bet will have more and more story time in a story that is NOT about them. Why make 2 OCs that are bugging first year in Ninja school was 5 during war time 6 in peace times with their final year being as soon as they can do the final test during war times or 12 during peace times. Most girls are still developing from 10-18 and less than 10% are c cup by 14. So make it more believable or just stop writing.

This is stupid... THEY LITERALLY WERE IN THE FUCKING ROOM WHEN NARUTO BROUGHT A FUCKING JONIN TO THE HOKAGE AND THEY PUT THIS STUPID TEST THING WHEN HE MEETS THE ANBU?!
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Where did your mind go?, it seems that some 5 year old told you to do this really. NARUTO HAS THE FUCKING KYUUBI AND THE HOKAGE TRAINED HIM, any killing intent that these flesh bags release on him is like a kid throwing a tantrum and YOU should know that. Heck the captain should know that. The fact you have this anbu team think that ANY ONE fucking person was stronger than Naruto and was trying to intimidate him...then you failed.
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If the Anbu were really paying attention like all anbu supposed to have the skill to, they would know NOTHING they did would get a reaction out of Naruto. You made some stupid scenario for stupidity's sake and thought it would be a good idea when it was not. Next time you should make sure to re-read your chapters so a big plot hole like this does not pop-up.

Great job please continue

Take an L my dude
Jk not really I’m being sarcastic that was a lie it’s Opposite Day isn’t it I have a mental disease that forces me to say the opposite of what I mean.

Enjoyed it

please dont make child porn

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What the fucking hell kind of ending is that! What the fuck

I'm sorry to be writing this but...this is the worst fucking fanfiction that I have seen in my , I said it!Hate me for my opinion but i just want you to know that when making stories like this one, you can't add OC's. The reason behind this is that when you add OC's/a OC to a story is that it ruins the adventure and excitement when the character learns and progresses the more you get into the story. And I am sorry thag I am writing hate but i must say that this has a great plot and would be better without the OC's.

I love this book hahah

WHy the fuck, would joining anbu, take a fucking years time? that makes no sense at all, and the fact that you think they join the acedemy a year before they graduate is simply idiotic, they probably join when they are 8, or even earlier, as it used to be very normal to graduate at 10, but people like kakashi graduated at 5 so there really is no way the join the acedemy at 11.

So Sakura/Ino being "presidents" of Sasuke's fan club is wrong. And it's ok to bash them. But Hinata being the president of Naruto's fan girl club is ok. Yeah right. It's BS! Another bashing Sakura fic...What a surprise...

I like what I'm reading so far. (Chapter 1)

"Why didn't Naruto kill his aggressors, that I did not understand...

Besides he was being too kind...

Where is the superiority complex, where is the darkness that inevitably comes with intelligence, yet all you made is a cliche piece of humanist work -.-"
I agree I suppose I can tolerate Naruto being OP but the fact that he seems to have no weakness. I would have suspected something like Light from death note or Sasuke or Shikamaru with great intelligence comes superiority complex or a weakness such as laziness in the form of Naruto.

I'm worried this is going to be another story where naruto becomes ANBU, who by DEFINITION and MANDATE are completely ananomous to all but a teammate or 2 due to the foxholl effect and the hokage; but characters who should never be aware of their connection to the organization for both sides' protection just happen to find out like its no big deal. I mean who cares if half the class and their families know. they won't tell right? let it slip? discuss it among themselves and be overheard?