| Reviews for A Kiss for Luck |
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Irina Hunter chapter 2 . 12/8/2014 DG was five when she was sent out of the O.Z. |
DragonRose4 chapter 4 . 8/31/2011 I hope nothing terrible has happened to you. I came across this and I see it hasn't been updated in a while. I am really enjoying this story as there are not enough Tin Man fics out there at all and nothing seems to inspire the urge for people to write more. (I should write the SyFy channel and have them re-run the series) I think you have a wonderful grasp on the characters and I agree with Hobbit that you and a select few other authors would be great at writing a continuance of the series. Well good luck and I hope this will be finished sometime. If you need a beta I haven't done it officially in a long time but I could certainly pick up my red pen again for such a wonderful author. :P |
KariSilver chapter 4 . 7/3/2011 Oh. My. Gods. Just, wow! This is brilliant! Your writing flows so well, and you tell the story so expertly! I really hope you haven't abandoned this story because it's awesome :D |
owlgrl chapter 4 . 9/1/2009 this is a lovely story. I believe you've captured the nature of each of the characters very well. I hope you update it soon. |
Random-Battlecry chapter 4 . 7/5/2009 Cheers for more dancing, a very well written DG, and a brief appearance from a note perfect Cain. I don't know why FF sent me the updates for the first two chapters and then none after that, but hopefully I have remedied that. And yes you must update! Get it out of the neat little folder and splash it for the world to see. PS. Brando sends his love. PPS. Frankie sends his toupee. |
Random-Battlecry chapter 3 . 7/5/2009 Okay, I like this backstory for Ambrose a lot. (Again, can you imagine how Tin Man would have been if they hadn't cut so much out? I bet there was a lot more for Glitch, and a lot more to him) And regardless of change in tone, memories-within-memories is very much in keeping with the basic style of the original, so... ten points. |
Random-Battlecry chapter 2 . 7/5/2009 I SWEAR to you that I reviewed this! I can't believe FF would do such a thing as to eat my review. Actually, I take that back, I believe it, I just don't like it. *sighs* Anyway. I wish it wouldn't have, because I'm sure that the original review I left was much more interesting and/or important than this one. Basically I believe it was something about your skill in differentiating the two Ambroses. Or rather, Ambrose and Glitch. They're very obviously two boughs off the same tree, but... never mind. The tree thing is going nowhere. Very well done, is what I'm trying to say. |
Random-Battlecry chapter 1 . 7/5/2009 I'm quite attached to that teensy little scene with Young!DG and Ambrose. It would have been great if they had explored their past and future relationship in the miniseries, but, as we were discussing earlier, too much seems to have been edited from the final cut. (Or cut out of the final edit. Either one.) |
doragon no mizu chapter 4 . 6/24/2009 So far the storyline is very interesting. I'd love to see where this is going, keep up the good work! |
Danibat chapter 4 . 3/24/2009 Oh wow. This was another great chapter. I got all emotional with DG releasing the spirits from objects and agreed right along with her-those Medico's are creepy. I love the flash of jealousy at the end and I can't wait for Glitch to wake back up. I want to know his feelings on all that has been new since he was parted from himself. And the Queen! I want to know what the Queen's reaction is to their relationship. I apologize for not being very clear about where I was confused in the last chapter. I got confused when it switched over from Emerald Eyes to Lavender Eyes in the memories and the time period that had past. I re-read it and found the two years remark. Towards the end of the tree scenes with Lavender Eyes A couple of the dialogue breaks made me think he might have switched to another memory or combined a memory with a more current one. Thanks for the shout out. I wiggle in pleasure every time I see a new chapter. Awaiting anew! |
CattyRose chapter 4 . 3/24/2009 That was sweet. I absolutely loved the look into DG's head this chapter (the jealousy she felt towards Az was the perfect touch) as she watched over Glitch...or should I say Ambrose, now? I can't wait for our beloved flamboyant adviser to awaken, and to see the interaction between the two of them, so put the next chapter up soon, 'kay? Thanks for the shout out, by the way. So long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Promise. |
HobbitofRavenclaw chapter 1 . 3/23/2009 This is just the cutest1 Its so belivably them and so wonderful and his views on love and how he feels about her vs the tree This is truly wonderful Maybe if they make a series you can write for it thatd be great Sliante Hobbit |
CattyRose chapter 3 . 3/22/2009 Oh, a look back into Ambrose's relationship with Lavender Eyes...how adorable! They really never give him much of a background, but I love the idea he was like the Queen's little brother. It goes a long way in explaining his loyalty to her and giving a bit of an insight into his previous personality. I love how calling people "doll" was already a quirk of his long before he became Glitch. Great job, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and some of the aforementioned DG. |
Danibat chapter 3 . 3/21/2009 Glitch/Ambrose is too cute. I'm really enjoying these flashbacks and the subtle integration you are hinting at. The end was a joy with the typical Glitch slang we are used to being shown as Ambrose slang as well. His caring and giving nature presented as something he had no matter how much brain he contained. Although I must admit I got a little confused as to who he was talking to at several points. Great update! Eagerly awaiting. |
CattyRose chapter 2 . 3/19/2009 Oh, wow. This chapter was even more adorable than the last, and I didn't think that was possible. I love how perfectly you show Glitch/Ambrose's tenderness towards DG (and Az) no matter what the circumstances, and the elegant way you introduced Glitch to Ambrose. I really hope we get to see more flashbacks and Glitch and Ambrose interaction, as well as maybe some DG next chapter. Either way, this is a truly terrific story, and I'm sad to see it doesn't have more reviews, as this masterpiece of yours deserves such praise! |