Woohoo! It's a set-in-Canada fic! Kudos to you, my fellow Canadian. This fic is awesome.

I know this is an old story, but, it was REALLY great writing! *claps*

Now on to AO3 to read the sequel (which was how I found this story in the first place! (_) )

Ryuichi

Bleah, I thought I was signed in when I reviewed this story just now. (_);

My review stands. :PPPP

Ryuichi

Okay, I know this is an older story, but after reading your comments, I want to say a few things. :P

First, its absolutely amazing how you described Zoro's POV during the sex scene. How he was so focused that he didn't even masturbate. Simply brilliant!

Second, how Usopp acted was point on. Scared, but still brave in his own way.

Third, the beginning of the chapter with Sanji, Ace and Kalifa was hilarious! I can't wait to read the sequel (which is how I found this story in the first place.)

Great writing, btw!

Ryuichi

Im so confused WTF Kaku are you with us or against us

If I hear October in Vancouver one more time im going to scream lol. I like the set up for the next chapter and now I cant wait to read whats going to happen.

OMG law hes great. So far this story is really really good interesting and angsty

I like Sanji and Mihawk in this they are kind of like friends? yes i am questioning because its an odd friendship

At this point I dont care if CP9 ends up being the bad guys again they are funny as hell

So wait are CP9 the good guys now..? I mean im cool with that just caught me off guard a bit.

I like Kaku in this so far

Soo, Chapter 10 is over...
Umm is it just me or isn't anybody else too thinking that a 24/7 observation by CP9 Agents, elite forces, is kinda much ado about a random civil person working in the restaurant? I mean, there're a lot more employees than just him, which actually deserves the same treatment...
Or are those Don Krieg Gang members only focused on killing Sanji, no one else of the restaurant? But they want to harm Zeff and his crew, which means it shouldn't mind who of them they kill...

Ok, maybe I find out if I've read on a little more :)

I really habe to so homework but i stuck to your Story again. It's engrossing!
As I said before, I do not ship Ace x Sanji, but in that way you built up the story, their relationship makes sense (However I'm glad they the amount of Zosan will increase from now on :P ) Jap. That's it,
*oh, I have to mention that couch scene in which sanji lay on Zoro's lap and went with his fingers through sanjis hair - Kawaiiiiii da yo 3*

Cuz I'm a little tired I just want to leave a short comment before I go to bed. Umm first of all I like your writing style and how you managed to get the characters not become ooc :) it's cute to watch them arguing but caring at each other the same time ;) one point, the sanji - ace relationship is not my thing due to Zosan being my otp, so I'd never pair them with anyone else , but eventhough it kinda fits into the storyline.

Thumbs up and good night, I definitely will read on ;)

I love this fic so darn effing much *sobs*
There's so many lovely points to love in this lovely fic I can't even-

First, the setting, the plot, the characters, the love. Brilliant. Simply wonderful. So many characters were involved. Their characters were spot on. So many relationships going on, the witty scenes, the cheesy scenes, the omg-so-intense scenes. All were perfect. Perfect!

Second, the feels and romance going on. It's not entirely cheesy, not overly dramatic, not too complicated. I absolutely LOVE parts where nobody says anything, and the next moment they kiss or hug. No unneeded dialogues, just doing it because it felt right. The affectionate moments, the funny moments, the awkward moments. Just gotta love em all 3333333

Lastly, the Sanji 3 It feels like he's being passed around in a circle that keeps expanding. Kissing them on the way XD Or somewhat like a yaoi game/visual novel where Sanji is the main character and he meets his lovely bishounen partners. It also feels like each have their own route/ending with him ohohoho (Secretly hoping one day Kalifa and Ace would kidnap Zoro and tell him all about their "adventures" with Sanji)

Overall, I felt that there wasn't enough Luffy XDD I support LuSan too /shot/

Once again, awesome fic! Really love it! Glad to hear there's a sequel :D I might pass out from all the EverybodyXSanji 3333 Please keep writing!