I really liked it, please expand this story!
Lots of love and encouragement, Felicity.

olha eu sou Ichiruki também, mais temos que concordar que o Byakuya não olha para a Rukia de forma paternal não, na verdade se o sentimento dele fosse realmente este ele não teria problemas para ficar perto dela, abraços

wow! that was amazing! :)

Aw,poor Byakuya.

Such a sweet story! I love the way you portrayed his guilt through the repetition of Inexcusable. Its a great title too, really captures the feel of everything (if that makes sense). _

Ahh so sweet! The Kuchiki brother-sister moments!

Ah. the guilt of the brother. Well written by the way. Poor rukia though, but I pity Byakuya even more now.

Aw, a revise of the one with Risa, huh? cute! The adding of details and poor Byakuya's emotions made it even sadder, and the ending was adorable, he's so paternal!

The brother-sister thing made it more intimate, too and was really sad! i like to think that although he hasn't (and probably never will) go into much detail, tite kubo will acknowledge that since the arrancar-aizen discovery, byakushi and rukia will be closer. this did a beautiful job of summing up their relationship and protectiveness, I LOVE IT! poor byakushi, poor rukia!