sorry to see this go unfinished i liked your writing style and this was a damn good story. take it easy hope to see more from you.

Honestly the shittiest chunin exam ever written
So bad that I won’t bother reading the rest of the story

This is fucking stupid... Why not just say that Gaara attacked him? Is he not meant to defend himself? For fucks sake...

Jesus shit... punctuation, my dude. Punctuation. This is a pretty interesting story and reasonably well written, but every sentence is a run-on, and it's like you've never heard of the comma... I can't follow your dialogue, because it's all once solid flow.

For example, just looking up from this box: "To be honest he was but that's not to say that you can't get better but you're going to have to work hard and overcome your obsession with Sasuke he needs a friend more than anything."

It ought to read something like: "To be honest, he was, but that's not to say that you can't get better - but you're going to have to work hard... and overcome your obsession with Sasuke. He needs a friend more than anything."

Great job

Awesome premise and not bad language but everything kind of just runs on into each other. Makes it feel like everything is happening at the same time which just isnt believable. Too much too fast is not good.

This Naruto is worse than the one in the anime. If he was train by the old school, how come he is announcing his skill and strength to everyone he meets. Shouldnt he be more reserved about this things.

This story is just ridiculously.

This started really well. Naruto being trained as an ANBU. Then he becomes a jerk who doesnt give a fuck who thinks he is smarter than everyone and beyond fault. I hated seeing naruto like that. There was no reason for it and it threw away the premise of the story.

Thank you

This was a really good story! I love the old timers and how Naruto could have been stronger if he was just trained properly! I was sad when Shin died :( I also liked when Naruto and Sakura beat up Saskue, verbally and physically lol. I liked Shino and Hinata in this too. The gifts were cool! Also, it was really thoughtful of you to outline the End when you couldn't finish it. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

Too bad this is discontinued, I was really enjoying it, and it went in directions I didn't expect. You might want to put 'discontinued' in the description, otherwise it's a bit of a shock to read what you think is a completed story, only to discover that it's not, really.

Ok, I fucking loved the TF2 Meet the Sniper reference

Ok, so, I haven't started reading yet but I just wanna say that when I read your title the only think I can think of is:
"Fool, if I had taught him the _new_ way, he might have stood a chance."
Am I the only one here who watched Dragon Ball Z Abridged?

Ninja did fight alone and ninja did also die alone