Okay, first off, I just wanted to say I do realize this fanfic was published in 2009, but I just found it and wanted to state my opinion, whether it would be seen or not. So...
Wow. How do write a long ass chapter about something so short, and yet make it interesting and addictive all at the same time. Normally, I'd get bored if a chapter was this long and about one, single thing, but you pulled it off perfectly.
Please teach me your ways, oh wise one...
Anyway, thank you for sharing this beautiful work!

I know this is old but it's poetry! I had to comment on how amazing the flow of it is! It's perfection

my favorite fallout ficlove it, very well done!

This was brilliant!

You are amazing. Just, completely amazing. You give fanfiction writers such a good name. Reading this just blows my mind. As lame as this sounds, I hope my writing will be as good as yours one day. Your pieces are always so deep and eloquent and beautiful.

This was a wonderful story!

Please write more because you're too awesome to give up :D

I know this is an older story, but I just found it today. Very very wonderful story! I love Charon and your LW is adorable.

Wow. Just... wow.

I kind of lost eh desire to work on ym own story any more, because, simply, you said all there was to say. I'm completely amazed as how you managed to convey so many emotions ans truths in so few and perfetclty written words.

Stunning.

The story was beautifully written and I was easily able to place myself in her position. It was very lovely, one of the best stories I've read in a long time. )

I think even in our world we deal with the same issues one would in a post-apocalyptic Earth. Your story, in my opinion, captures that idea. Once again, very lovely.

This is by far the best Charoncentric story I've seen so far. Your LW is great; I love her thoughts being layered in the story with the smutty goodness ;) I think you Charon is great, it's by far the most believeable one, and I want this to happen in-game. Why can't we get a litte ghoul love? *sobs* Anyway; great story, thank you for making my day! :)

Okay, this story was pretty much perfect, and your OC is unbelievable and this is, in all honestly, the best Charon romance I've ever read. It was gritty and funny and HOT, and you put their story in the middle of the sexin's perfectly. Loved it.

I usually hate stories that go back and forth, but your setup was brilliant. I understood it, and it pulled me in deeper with your character. Charon in this, is beautifully well written. The best part, is that the ending doesn't leave you feeling empty.

I bow down to this.

Beautifully written. Definitely a favorite.

Wow, that really was a wonderful oneshot. You did a beautiful job.

I see that it's been a while since anyone's reviewed this gorgeous little diamond, but I shall try my hand...

Dear god woman have you perfected first person. Whenever I read a first person piece, I usually run away before I can get very far into it. But you COMPLETELY caught me off guard, and I didn't know that it was in first person until a couple paragraphs in.

Not to mention the beauty of the whole thing. You must have worked REALLY hard on this thing, and it totally payed off. This was the single most impressive and enjoyable Charon/LW fic I have read yet.

Amazing job. Really, really amazing.