ok, i've decided this is the last 'fic of yours i'm going to review today, because otherwise i'll be completely addicted.

but god, this really blew me away.

it's my favorite out of yours so far.

i have really no idea how in the world you came up with this, but it's beautiful.

in a twisted sort of way. it's raw and real and painful and just like tess.

i can't really say anything else. sorry. this honestly deserves a way better review than i can produce, and that discourages me a little bit. but i tried, right? :)

love, cami

The last line blew me away. It tied the entire fic together, giving the reader a raw taste of Tess' emotions. Amazing job.

Wow this was good but depressing hey I'm not complaining it was really sad but really good at the same time if that makes any sense and I love how it was Nate and not Shane..I jsut like Ness more ;)

maz x

I think this may be one of the best things you've ever wrote.

It so raw. Like so raw and real and angry and hurt. There's no suger coating and that's why you can feel it so deeply.

I know this isn't long enough for this kind of brilliance but I'm utterly speechless.

Great job.

Wow. That was incredible. Honestly, you have a beautiful writing style and it gets better every time I read something of yours. This was completely depressing but you wrote it SO WELL. Great job!

:O

Wow...

That was just... tragic-am I allowed to use that word? ;D

Anyway, this was a very good story, sad.. painful to read yet I couldn't turn away from it. :P

Great Job! :)

You're a murderer.

Oh, dear God. This was the most twisted, dark thing I've ever read. And it was completely FANTASTIC. I loved every minute of it. You captured the description and I feel like every word was carved into my heart. Fantastic.

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful. You write so, so well that whenever I read anything of your's I'm left in awe. You're one of my favourite authors on this site and I love everything you read, and this was certainly no exception. Amazing. :)

Wow, this was powerfully written, short but to the point. Excellent job at portraying Tess. Nate does seem a little OOC, but we never got to know his character in the movie, so who really knows. I feel sad for Tess. All in all, great job Katie. You're a fantastic writer, and I wish I could be such an excellent writer like you someday.

I liked it. The religion thing was a nice input that peopled don't normally do. And I get the controversy thing at the beginning. I relate to Tess in a way in this (not about the abortion, or the cutting, or the brokeness) but in the sort of atheist at moments kind of thing. I don't really like the way Nate is portrayed... he does seem like the most religious out of the boys, but the whole "you're a murderer, tess" thing is kind of creepy, even for angst. But other than that, it's really good. I'd love to know how you think of these things, really.