Three words where’s the rest?

cuando sera la actualizacion de esea historia

Awesome rewrite! More, please! More, please! The original left me crying, but this one has me hopeful. Maybe a victory at last?

Hello. When in the world are you going to finish this story? You have me going insane wanting to know the outcome of this story. You can't leave me hanging like this :-). Hurry it up! I need more. this is absolutely Fabulous.

Thank you

I admit to being a lurker on (one of these days I'll contribute something...) but I always get excited when I see that you've posted something! Thanks for the update!

I am so glad you added a new chapter. Having read this in its former state ages ago I can easily say this is much much better. A better plot, better written, and hopefully (though the memory is foggy) a happier ending. :)

Well done Groovykat! Keep going!

What a great find! My only regret is that I haven't read it earlier but my intent is to make up for lost time!

Your introductory chapter was great. You've obviously aged the characters a bit, particularly if Keyop is able to live alone and doesn't want to be treated like a kid (not that he ever liked being treated like one anyway) minus the speech defect (God bless you!). And you've managed to give us glimpses of their personalities. I had to LOL at Tiny's reaction to the possible loss of his baby, the Phoenix. Pilots really do look at their planes as their girls huh? Although Anderson seemed like such a tight *ss; which is how he's portrayed on the show so i digress. I liked how you made the G-Force's transition from California to Canada. Even nicer was having Mark live (conveniently) two floors above Princess. How utterly divine! I could see where you were going with it and absolutely swooned at your take on their relationship. Loved it! Loved it!

Why did Anderson have to throw a monkey wrench in their relationship though! I literally bellowed a giant "ARRGH!" I know in his mind, separating the Eagle and the Swan made sense but pairing the Swan with the Condor in order to tame him; that reasoning totally ticked me off!And glad that Mark felt the same way, showing a degree of backbone. Saying that I'm a man first (albeit briefly) the Eagle second. I gleefully laughed aloud at "...Jason is *king anything that walks!" Although Mark did give in to Anderson's demand upon reasoning that he'd have to choose one day to make the ultimate he be able to do it?

Brilliant work GK! I know I have more to read, but know enough to realize this piece worthy of my favorites pile!

Talk about a cliff hanger! You are killing me . . . you cannot just stop here! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH!

(so yes, school is over and I finally had time to catch up on my reading. once i started this, i just couldn't stop. this is a great tale. i am pining for more. begging. whimpering. all that.)

School is winding down and I finally found some time to catch up on my reading - so glad I did. This story has already taken more twists then I ever guessed! I don't know the original, but I am really enjoying this revised version. While Princess may be acting/dressing OOC, it is so plausible given the emotional situation. Really interesting idea and the story is just drawing me in.

She totally did one on Mark didnt she? Again another of your fics that has me checking for updates several times a day. Looking fwds to see how it all turns out.

These are GREAT! I can't wait to see the next chapter!

I want to see how far off the deep end she'll go. Look fwd to the next update.