What a cool story! I really enjoyed it.
I made a mistake and didn't realize it: I started reading from chapter 2 and there was 1. I remember reading what you said at the beginning before the story started, but then I made this confusion xD

I just didn't like Ben having doubts about how he felt about Kevin (when he considered heterosexuality), and then said that he loves him. I found it fast and you could have just left him unsure of how he felt about Kevin.
And I didn't like that angry Gwen. She seemed boring in many moments :(

However, I really liked the story, and I want to highlight a specific part: in chapter 2, on Kevin's death scene and his statement to Ben in his dream, I immediately remembered a very similar (and sad) scene in a soap opera that I saw here in Brazil.
The soap opera is called "Belíssima" (2005 - 2006) and had a replay in (2018 - 2019), where I watched it for the first time. In one of the final scenes, the character Julia cried for the death of André, who loves her and his last words were "I love you ... always ... I love you Julia" ...

Please see the video at this link: watch?vC2fiBqqxY78

I highlighted this because when I met and started to really admire Bevin, this soap opera was passing and the taste for this couple transferred to him too, along with the song "The Blower's Daughter" (Damien Rice), which I think is very beautiful although not understand english fluently {} S2
There is even a Brazilian version of the song that was initially used as a theme for this couple, until it was replaced by its original :)

Sorry for the big comment, but I needed to say it all. The dream scene almost moved me. I would like to be moved by Bevin's stories; when I do it, it's sad or something that involves something external :(
But anyway, I really liked the story and thank you so much for making it and sharing it (and forgive the translation mistakes if I made it) ' \o/ S2 :)

awe

awe its cute

Well... That was... Interesting (meanwhile is mentality face palming)

Love it

you should put up and aleternate ending for this with what you originally wrote

Wow for your first lemon, that was HAWT! Love the entire fic. The parenthetical interjections were a little annoying but the story itself was great! Keep writing! I'm looking forward to more. ;)

This has to be my favorite one... I ... I'm actually in tears right now from my laughing...

... shit, there goes my lungs!

Sai kun

Damn that was hot

I got a nose bleed just reading this. I love it. I haven't had a good fan girl moment in such a long time. Now excuse me while I go torment my roommates with a barrage of squee's and what not...

*Epic fangirl squeal*...OMG...Just...FREAKING...EPIC...

wow chapter 2 was really well written with the whole kill kevin off i was like *gasp* omg lol

Wow! I read all the chapters until I get to the last one, then I review! This story was awesome! I loved it! the Lemon...pure genius! 3 lol poor Gwen, has no clue! XD lol the ca wash incident was epic~! I loved how he fell asleep! XD Made me laugh hard...hehe. the dream was a cool part too! lol yes, you did make up for the killing off of Kevin with a lovey kissy scene~! 3 Loved that too! All together, Awesome story! lol Uke Ben rocks~! X3 He's supposed to be uke! kukuku~! 3

-suffering from nosebleed- Damn...that was hot! And the mush was cute! Cupcakes for you!

wicked awesome! XD