Oh honey, and you sound like an illiterate. Poor dear. Usually the people who are attracted to this fandom have a pretty decent vocabulary and can comprehend an unusual turn of phrase or two... But there is always the exception to the rule, as you so kindly demonstrate.

What the fuck is "black determination" you sound like a dumbass.

You story overall is amazing, captures the cannon of this sadly short JatD show. Although, I would've hoped to have seen some of Dragon in there, since I'm assuming he's still alive and being cocky per usual.

But truly, I loved this fanfic, even if it was short. But maybe it could've been a bit longer, have had some more buildup at the beginning. Get the readers to really grasp the feeling. Great story man, good job!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Flawlessly written, and I believe you have left me speechless. I adore this little gem, and you definitely inspired me to write a JatD fic one day. It's such a shame that this fandom is so small compared to the other one (Harry Potter) we both seem to belong in. But, yes, maybe one day I'll write one :) Anyways, like I said above I enjoyed every word of this little fic, especially the last chapter - it amuses me to entertain the possible idea of Sir Ivon is actually awake, and he's just laid there listening to what they were saying and being slightly awkward for him :D

Good Job,
Chels xx

I... Am ... Spech...lesss
Best. Story. Ever.
...Perfect...

I...wow...,I

All insparation and perfection!

Omg this story was beautiful!
S.N.

I like your writing technique. Damn I feel bad for both of them.
S.N.

Ew that idea is a little sickening
S.N.

Yeah...me like

GUNTHER! NOOOOOOOO!

Yay happy endinggg!

I so LOOOOVE your writing you are such a good writer!

And Sir Ivon sat there awkwardly, pretending to be asleep...

I absolutely love this! I can't wait to finish up the story! You're a fabulous writer, and I hope I can read more of your work!

.GAWD! That was bloody AMAZING! You truly are a genius ;D