I really enjoyed your book. It was a fun easygoing read.

I love it, I'm going to read the sequel right now :3

I really love this story. It’s one of my favorite Hermione romance stories. Bonus points since it’s not Dramione. I just wanted to say the Harpies won 120:40, which doesn’t make sense because the Golden Snitch is worth 150 points. Sorry. I know it’s hard to write fan fiction and be canon compliant with small things like that.

I know this is kinda jerky, but the score can't be 120-40 because the inch is 150 points, someone would have to have at least 150 points

Very creative and cute story. I have not read many OW/HG stories previously. I liked the scenes with the orphans.

Bien tenté, mais la prochaine fois demande peut-être à quelqu'un qui parle français de faire la traduction ;)
(Translation: well tried, but maybe next time you should ask someone who can speak french to do the translation.) It's painfully obvious that you used an online translator (the "my my" into "mon mon" being the cringiest). For example, "falling in love" is "tomber amoureux(se)". "Tomber dans l'amour" means "falling inside love", like it's a hole.
Anyways, it's not a big deal, and you made me laugh, so there's that ;)
Signed: just a french girl wandering by.

Fantastic story!

I dis...
The ending was soooooo CUTE!

Fantastic fic!

Aww, cute! Good job!

Please work on your grammar,especially commas.

Ok, so I gotta start by saying that I'm usually not an Oliver/Hermione shipper, but this story definitely made me like the couple a lot. I absolutely loved this story. Awesome job! Looking forward to reading the sequel.

faded instead of fainted; cost instead of caused; spat instead of splat; worried or bothered instead of burrowed;

These are some words I read that need to be changed in this chapter. Otherwise, it's a good story so far. I'm looking forward to see how you develop it. I know this story is complete, but I hope you can take the time to fix it one of these days.

For what Ginny did . Harry should totally ditch her n marry o Geranium.

How is it possible to transfigured the contents of an actual book of he doesn’t have photographic memory of the books a contents to begin with?