| Reviews for Deal With The Devil |
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Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2014 what happens to my kurumu and don't say shes tsukunes tsukune can eat a dick well my kurumu be ok but anyway love ur fanfic |
radizt chapter 5 . 7/3/2014 Hmmm...first,second,and third chapters are great,forth one OK,the rest just *due to the lack of better words im going to say dumb*. Please put more sex stuff in it,also make kurumu choke tsukune with her breasts more hard feelings...i hope |
de killer chapter 11 . 5/16/2013 this story was AWESOME!… though it was kind of weird with the somewhat poetic ending. good job. |
marceline Avadee chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 omg! i love this...o.o |
Kyle Dowds chapter 4 . 6/27/2012 You arent very great at this viewer yokai only transmit video they cannot transmit sound. You need to start reading rosario vampire season 2 or reread it and thouroughly not just skim through it. |
Kyle Dowds chapter 3 . 6/27/2012 Sorry accidentally sent my last. .Tsukune was vital to the survival of the world. You should have included this into rens explanation to kurumu of what was going on. 2 Not the hades kings, they are called The Three Dark Lords. 3 You also need to know the main characters last names like Mizore Shirayuki instead of mizore sno wommanI am on ch4 and it is great except for the things above. |
Kyle Dowds chapter 3 . 6/27/2012 You obviously did not read the second season of the manga otherwise you would know there are gaps in your story and some typos. 1 the date is june ? 2012 right now but anyway in the current chapters of rosario vampire they have to save the world from alucard and I think her name is akuha if im wrong its pretty close. Tsukune had to undergo the human modification technique. He had to have to |
rafael chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 awesome fan fiction |
Rafael chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 this fan fiction was really epic and i think they should make up a plot in the anime |
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 9 . 1/10/2011 This was a truly great chapter! Woot! Vampie Moka is back D And is kicking butt as usual! |
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 8 . 1/10/2011 Why would Ren want to marry? There is no WAY they would let her marry him! This was a truly great chapter! I loved the michaels sword, great part! Something that can defeat Ren! I find it funny that we don't call him the devil, we still call him Ren. |
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 7 . 12/30/2010 WOAH! That was SO unexpected! Either that or I'm just slow. I actually did not expect him to be the devil, I thought that the title was a metaphor (Is that the word I'm looking for?) |
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 6 . 12/9/2010 EPICNESS! You did fine on the fight scenes! I could really picture it happening. You are very descriptive, well done! |
SakuraXxXIchigonot logged in chapter 5 . 12/9/2010 EPIC CHAPTER! Yeah it was pretty hot and I LOVED the ending though! OMGZ They found Ruby! |
SakuraXxXIchigonot logged in chapter 4 . 12/9/2010 Awesome chapter! Grrr. Ren is such an a-hole! |