Hm, this writing style is a lot less intense, I can get the child inquesitive nature from it, it's ok but I like your more intense writings the best. I also like that you have them knowing Japanese first, I always figured since Splinter came from Japan and his master spoke in Japanese that would be their main language. The only flaw in that would be, how did they learn english so well and speak with American accents? Still, I enjoyed this none the less.

Awesome story. I really liked it and can see Donnie thinking this way. You're a good writer.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

...isn't this unbelievable? .Review? Dude. You don't deserve this at all! I apologise for the delay on my part. I actually promised myself to come back to this during the weekend so here I am:

I'm just wondering why you're using the asterisks instead of italising the japanese words. XD

Nonetheless, it's cute to see Don going on a one-turtle field trip; to satisfy that inquisitive mind of his, and I do enjoy reading his keen observations on the world out there.

It was nicely-written.

Also, I think Don would agree with Einstein's humility there. ;)

Aw, so cute :)