This is really good! :)

Aw. That was adorable.

What a great chapi. It really gave anice glimpse of post outsiders and t.w.t.t.I.n. The part where soda and darry were outside- precious.

Fantastic! I've never really put a lot of thought into Soda's or Darry's reactions. It was just like Steve to tease, and Darry to worry. I do wonder if Darry or Soda's reactions were a little over-the-top, just because 1) they probably would have noticed Pony getting serious with a girl sooner and 2) they had to have expected it around his age. Minor crit, though. I certainly don't mean to suggest your character portrayal is inaccurate...that was just my take on their reactions.

Thank you for this well-written piece! :0)

This story is ok. is this stry going to be a romance story? If you sequel this story, don't put a sex scene in it. It would be OOC for Pony to do that.