| Reviews for Stars |
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  Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/23/2015 Nice. It's sweet and tranquil. Shows feelings perfectly. ~Anne Onymous~ |
 hollyhobbit101 chapter 1 . 3/28/2015 Oh, so sad. I absolutely love this piece. Well done. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Touching, you have a good way with words |
| VidiaPhoenix chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Aw, this is so sad. Zoe is one of my favorite characters. |
| Aestus Maris chapter 1 . 8/18/2010 Awww. Poor Artemis. I like it when there are ff's that show the god's feelings. Zoe is my favourite character so... |
| deletewavedelete chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 This is a lovely study of Artemis's character. I like how you describe the previous lieutenant, unnamed, who had never been mentioned. I especially like your style of writing. It's very... hmm. Flow-y? Well, they're short sentences, but very descriptive in each, and it still goes very smoothly. I envy you. :p The last two paragraphs of sort are very well placed - in my opinion, at least. The way you describe Artemis using her emotions to destroy her enemies, giving her a motive and showing that the gods actually care about the demigods they use. It's really great. :) Please continue to write this well - it's amazing. :) - Wave |
| Shrrgnien chapter 1 . 2/14/2010 What's Thalia, then? Chopped liver? Just kidding. That was a very powerful piece, I've read it before but never commented (Sorry). The tie-in with the moon reflecting Artemis' feelings was very clever. |
| Chygirl07 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010 woah that was beautiful :) great job! |
| believeinthegods chapter 1 . 8/22/2009 Yes! (Sorry, finally got the review button working, it's been broken for SO LONG!) Anyway - I just felt obliged to let you know that I thought this was absolutely stunning. Really, really. Zoe Nightshade stands as one of my all time favourite characters, and your words did such justice to that - beautifully worded, well structured and simplistic, but not aggravatingly so - very enjoyable, and, to use my own rather terrible term, a Day-Maker (something that made my day, if you were wondering...)Thank you. |
| 0nom0 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 This was amazing... I'm a bit speechless right now -Kay |
| Aelia Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 -sighs- Beautiful... |
| dreamcatcher96 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009 wow, sad, ALMOST MADE ME CRY! great fanfic though |
| Wow chapter 1 . 3/27/2009 Wow, thats all I have to say. |
| dnrl chapter 1 . 3/10/2009 Great characterization for Artemis...can't believe I almost missed this piece. :D Succinct and heart-rending. Wonderful job~! |
| theghostqueen chapter 1 . 3/6/2009 I loved this! I, also, love the character of Zoe Nightshade. Shame she died.:( Anyway, keep up the good work with your stories! |
